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Grand Canyon Portrait In Word

cascading water
flows into braided rivers
rush of white water

palaces of sandstone
towering monolith
statuesque splendor

weathered mosaics
ancient cathedrals carved in stone
natures masterpiece

Copyright © Lori Lucas Mcclure | Year Posted 2012

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Debra Squyres Date: 1/8/2013 6:39:00 PM What a glorious picture you have painted with these words. I like it when words form scenes in my head. Nicely done series of Haiku !! Login to Reply

Elizabeth Wesley Date: 9/7/2012 6:40:00 PM A masterpiece of haiku Lori, each of the three has a personality and adds to the splendor of this breathtaking place in the wilds of America. Beautiful! Login to Reply

Len Gasun Date: 8/10/2012 9:52:00 PM Wow! A nice vicarious experience I've got upon reading your haiku poem on Grand Canyon Portrait. Thanks for sharing! Login to Reply

Anne Rutherford Date: 7/14/2012 6:11:00 AM You and everyone else are getting so good at Haiku poems Lori .This is really good ,enjoyed it. Thank you for commenting on 'Jack'.Anne Login to Reply

Robert Pettit Date: 7/12/2012 2:45:00 PM I flew over the Grand Canyon twice on my way to Las Vegas. Even from an altitude of over thirty thousand feet, it looks wondrous. You have described it well in this fine work. Login to Reply

Matthew Anish Date: 7/12/2012 1:45:00 PM Reminds me of my trip to the Grand Canyon - your poems capture it well. You utilized this Asian form very skillfully. Peace & Love Matthew Anish Login to Reply

Charles Henderson Date: 7/10/2012 12:12:00 AM soup mail Login to Reply

Jonas L. Rozario Date: 7/9/2012 11:03:00 PM Really really wonderful...like this one a lot. Best of luck if for any contest!!! Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/9/2012 9:31:00 PM you are like a great wordsmith with this haiku set. Lovely! Login to Reply

Richard Palmer Date: 7/9/2012 6:18:00 PM wow great description in poetry,great write Lori Login to Reply

Rachel St.Cross Date: 7/9/2012 1:11:00 PM ‡ I Had To Favour This Treasure, Because Its Just That Beautiful. ‡ Login to Reply

Rachel St.Cross Date: 7/9/2012 1:03:00 PM ‡ Picturesque Amid Splendid Beauty, Beautiful Lori * Seems As Though Nature & Its Counterpart Collaborated To Present This Wonderful Scene In Which Your Beauty Has Sooo Elegantly Shared With Our Hearts * A Lovely Photo Of Your Own Priceless Heart * My Luv, Rachel ‡ Login to Reply