Grand

Such command and rank 
 Sheltered on a rainy day
  Tough oak, known splendour
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Kendrick Avatar
April 4, 2010 at 5:03 PM
Very descriptive Haiku..Keep the creative pen flowing. I especially like the second line. Sara
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April 4, 2010 at 5:37 AM
There is trouble in the forest, there is trouble with the trees. For the Maples want more sunlight, and the Oaks ignores their pleas. Lyrics by the Rock Band, Rush from their track Trees > mighty Haiku Gareth >> James
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April 3, 2010 at 10:14 AM
Indeed oaks are. Very nice Haiku, Grand indeed. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes, Caroline.
White Avatar
April 2, 2010 at 11:58 AM
A mighty fine Haiku- as it pours outside my window
Devonshire Avatar
April 2, 2010 at 11:27 AM
A marvelous tribute to the mighty oak, Gareth! Find some peace beneath this tree as you enjoy Easter. Love, Carolyn
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April 2, 2010 at 11:06 AM
The mighty oak....that first line is brilliant!! :) Love this!...Carrie
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