Gramps

GRAMPS

Grandad replaced father unknown to me:
Gramps shaped  my young mind instead of he.
Mother loved him,  went for holidays there;
We took turns in his old rocking chair.
Showed me the way to cut wood, turn  a screw;
Sang to me when I was sick with  the ‘flu.
Took me for  rides in his fishing boat;
Came to school in the rain carrying my forgotten coat.
He died with pneumonia.  We both were lost :
Didn’t  know what his raincoat trip would cost.
But good folks  like my gramps last forever
My memories of him live on and wither never.   

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Written on  31  July  2011  for Carol  Brown's competition
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Horne Avatar
August 2, 2011 at 10:57 AM
Many congratulations, Sydney : )
Onclaud Avatar
August 2, 2011 at 1:18 AM
up close and personal, syd...heaps of congrats on your amazing award!! :) huggs!
Johnson Avatar
August 1, 2011 at 10:40 PM
Congratulations on your win with your tribute to your grandpa. Love, Joyce
Mehta Avatar
August 1, 2011 at 8:59 PM
My congratulations on the second place win in the contest of carol, Sydney
Jones Avatar
August 1, 2011 at 8:42 PM
Another goosebumper... really nice write, Syd.
Ramsdale Avatar
August 1, 2011 at 6:25 PM
A winning congratulations! Caryl
Osita Avatar
August 1, 2011 at 5:50 PM
Congrats on your big win in Carol's contest.
Villanueva Avatar
August 1, 2011 at 4:54 PM
CONGRATULATIONS on the 2nd place win~~~~such a wonderful take~~~smile~~~*-*junjun
Brown Avatar
August 1, 2011 at 3:17 PM
Congratulations on your placement in my latest contest Sydney. It was very hard choosing the placements as I loved them all. Have a wonderful week. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
August 1, 2011 at 2:56 PM
Congrats Sydney on your second place win with this treasured poetry ...
Devonshire Avatar
July 31, 2011 at 4:32 PM
Oh, Syd, please don't blame yourself for the "raincoat trip." It seems like you had a wonderful grandfather who provided you with both skills and much love. Very touching entry for Carol's contest. Winning wishes headed your way. Love, Carolyn
Kendrick Avatar
July 31, 2011 at 2:51 PM
That would be a memory not forgotten..He reads like a caring and kind man..Good luck in the contest..Sara
Mantle Avatar
July 31, 2011 at 1:15 PM
Nice tribute to your Grandad. Best wishes for Carol's contest. em :)
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