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Graffiti On Wayra's Walls

Webs of graffiti Fill a dimly lit station-- Holding my map to nowhere I trace old paint stretch far Into abandoned rails called life. Second Edition Of Wayra, Nette Onclaud 15 August 2019

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Beata Agustin

Date: 10/12/2024 12:56:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Eve Roper

Date: 8/22/2019 11:53:00 PM

Congratulations Noel. Hugs Eve

Line Gauthier

Date: 8/22/2019 5:06:00 AM

Well done, Noel. Congrats on your podium finish.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/21/2019 2:18:00 PM

the idea of a directionless map was well expressed, noel...glad you took time to join my contest; huge cheers on your winning spot!...huggs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/21/2019 2:14:00 PM

I like the symbolism at the end, Noel. congrats on your win

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/21/2019 2:06:00 PM

- Mine was also Graffiti ... modern art with ink :) - But graffiti is actually "old art" - Well done, Noel :) - Congratulations on your win :) - // Anne-Lise :)