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Graduation Day

We stood dressed like Romans of long ago Our togas rustled in the wind Echoing our mixed emotions on that day As we lined outside the great hall. When at last we heard the familiar strain So we straightened our backs and walked Conversations ceased as we filed in twos Entered the hall and took our seats. Thus everything ended on one special day All our hardship, our toils, and tears But as we each received that piece of scroll We didn’t know what to make of it. March 18, 2023 2nd Place Graduation Day Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Craig Cornish

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Date: 4/21/2023 10:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Ryan! Love your last two lines - so much truth in them. All the best. Blessings.
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Date: 4/2/2023 6:24:00 AM
Wow! You won Craig's contest, that is awesome, Ryan, he is very hard to please, but your poem is enriching and just what he liked:) congratulations:)
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Ryan Gayagay
Date: 4/2/2023 7:54:00 AM
Thank you for the compliment. I am humbled but I will try to improve. As a high school teacher here in the Philippines, I can only write when I have free time, which is not much, due to so many clerical tasks that I have to attend to. God bless!
Date: 4/2/2023 5:43:00 AM
Wow! Congrats, Kabayan! Thanks for sharing this, making me nostalgic of my own graduation. God bless you.
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Ryan Gayagay
Date: 4/2/2023 7:51:00 AM
Thank you, Kabayan. As always, you are very generous with your praise. God bless you, too!
Date: 3/21/2023 6:48:00 PM
Ryan, your piece brings back memories for me. I didn't attend any of my higher education graduations, but I remember my high school one very vividly. I like "conversation ceased as we filed in twos". Anyone who has graduated will relate to that memory! Nice job!
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Ryan Gayagay
Date: 3/22/2023 10:09:00 PM
Thanks much for the compliment. It really means a lot for someone like me who's new here.

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