graduating from room 101

i once stood
within my own shipwreck
blaming cruel seas

years past
flotsam and jetsam
built a driftwood home

when storms came
that ramshackle shelter
self-destructed
while i
cursed foul weather

looking outward
never seeking inward
i decried a faithless fate

unt
a blinding truth
ransacked
an unseeing mind

simply that

I ALONE
am the author
of my own life-long
melodrama

none other than me
bore this responsibility

of such a tangled

tragicomedy
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Rodrigues Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 10:36 AM
Well done! Great metaphoric write!
Ashford Avatar
April 9, 2024 at 10:46 AM
Thank you, Kim. Good to know it worked for you. Best E.
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