Graciousness Senryu




                                Graciousness 
                                  9/20/2023



                          genteel and gracious
                          sun, sweetness, serenity
                          penning poetry

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John Lawless

September 21, 2023 at 6:46 AM

OH YEAH....my only problem is when I stumble into one of those moments is....I never have a pencil. Nice write Pangie, silky smooth

Panagiota Romios

September 21, 2023 at 7:48 AM

Dear John Always the wait! No pencil..lol I appreciate your words that describe the Senry as silky, smooth. I am so glad you read this. Thank you. Pangie xx

Victor Buhagiar

September 21, 2023 at 1:53 AM

What a lovely read. It embodies serenity. Blessings.

Panagiota Romios

September 21, 2023 at 7:45 AM

Always wonderful to see you, Do you know that you have a commitment to writing good poetry, and I think you for not trying to impress people. That makes you a genuine poet. I do mean that.. I am grateful for you reading me. Pangie xx

Ink Empress

September 20, 2023 at 9:23 PM

I love that second line, the alliterations and flow in this senryu is stunning my dear friend. You always write effortlessly .. always a pleasure reading you. Penning poetry of all that serene and gracious you are, keep penning pangie .

Panagiota Romios

September 21, 2023 at 7:42 AM

Ink,,,,s wonderful compliment. You just touched ~ my soul. Do you know Ink, I don’t write to impress anyone. That kind of writing really bores me.. Robert frost, never wrote in 9 syllable words, and yet he was a great poet, and so was Dickinson, and so was e.e. Cummings….I write for the common Man.. With gratefulness …Pangie. And I never do comments like I’m running for a subway train and I don’t have time for the poet. Thank you, Pangie.xx