Gracious Oasis

In my deserted life emotions desiccated desolate,
but I knew in you was nestled a calm niche of bliss,
in the recess of your remote heart I couldn’t locate.
In my deserted life emotions desiccated desolate,
I knew with a gracious oasis for me you would wait,
soulful serene solace in sated measure I won’t miss.
In my deserted life emotions desiccated desolate,
but I knew in you was nestled a calm niche of bliss.

November 20, 2020
Contest : Graciousness
Sponsor : Mohan Chutani
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Fowler Avatar
November 27, 2020 at 7:24 AM
Very nicely done Subimal. Congratulations on the win! Linda
Roper Avatar
November 26, 2020 at 8:16 AM
Subimal, congratulations and Happy Thanksgiving to you and your family. Hugs Eve
Logan Avatar
November 26, 2020 at 6:12 AM
Congrats on your winner, Subimal.
Radhakrishna Avatar
November 25, 2020 at 11:05 PM
Congrats Subimal your second line is special!! Congrats on your win!
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November 25, 2020 at 6:49 PM
Subimal, congratulations for your placement in my contest and thanks for graciously participating in it. It was so difficult to choose one from the other. Would have loved to place all entries as winners had it not been a Premier contest. Best. Mohan
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