Graceousness

GRACEOUSNESS

Graciousness flows from a kind soul
rarely seen in today's cold world
as Christ taught and clearly foretold.
Graciousness flows from a kind soul
one not anti-social and cold
be it man, woman, boy, or girl.
Graciousness flows from a kind soul
Rarely seen in today's cold world.


Contest: GRACIOUSNESS 
Sponsor :Mohan Chutani
Form: Triolet
Copyright: Nov.14, 2020

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Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 5/4/2021 12:49:00 PM

Such a beautiful piece so well penned Barbara, telling such a true commentary on today's sad world. Look forward to more from your gifted pen, God bless, Gordon

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 5/4/2021 12:48:00 PM

Such a beautiful piece so well penned Barbara, telling such a true commentary on today's sad world. Look forward to more from your gifted pen, God bless, Gordon

FJ Thomas

Date: 12/9/2020 6:46:00 PM

Your Triolet flows beautifully Barbara! I struggle with mine. Truly lovely.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/6/2020 6:39:00 PM

Beautiful sentiment which makes this poem a wonderful contestant in the contest.

Barbara Barry-Nishanian
Date: 12/6/2020 7:32:00 PM

Caren, my new friend you are so kind, Thank you.

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 11/24/2020 1:24:00 AM

it's a beautiful poem; if there is no gracious feeling in mind the outside won't be graceful.

Barbara Barry-Nishanian
Date: 11/24/2020 6:49:00 AM

So nice to meet you. Appreciate you liked my first Triolet form of poetry. Leaving to go read your poems...thank you

Sally Eslinger

Date: 11/19/2020 2:23:00 AM

Nice to meet you...and your poetry! I fell completely into the flowing stream of your poem. I have thought much about different chapter qualities. Sad to admit after reading this, I never singled out graciousness but now see why it needs to stand out by compassion & faithful. Thank you.

Barbara Barry-Nishanian
Date: 11/21/2020 1:24:00 AM

Hello new friend. Thank you for the nice comments my first Triolet. Educate me on "different chapter qualities". Generosity is a special quality of our Creator, along with His Loving Kindness (Grace) Thank you again.