Deb M Poet Rhyme

-Gracefully

 I am trying to grow old gracefully

Doing my best 

Knowing both the  pros and cons

Cons, that certainly put me to the test


I try to focus on the positives

Appreciate the gift and beauty of age

Though the ‘con’ l struggle with the most

The aches and pains that take centre stage!

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Kim Rodrigues January 18, 2025 at 7:14 AM Yep…When I was praying this morning, I thought of ‘all’ my ills but joyfully I am human and in the grace of God! Guess we made it, Deb, to experience old life..not all are given this! Blessings! Deb M February 12, 2025 at 12:42 AM We are truly the lucky ones Kim!! Debx

Jennifer Proxenos January 14, 2025 at 9:07 AM I Deb, i think most men don't mind too much as they grow older whether its' graceful or not, but women is a different ballgame, we all differ, except however, when it comes to pain, then we all feel this horrid con that puts us to the test. MY CLEVER POETESS, ALWAYS SPOT ON. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. Deb M January 14, 2025 at 1:53 PM How l love your visits Jen….you are such a bright spark! Debx

Gershon Wolf January 12, 2025 at 7:55 PM Grace is tough when we're in pain. Yet nothing to lose, and so much to gain. ~ gw Deb M January 13, 2025 at 6:09 AM Man of many wise words BB! Debx

Terrell Martin January 12, 2025 at 4:48 PM Words well spoken, Lady Deb. All of us can certainly relate. But if not the younger folks - they will in a few more years. “Time is the wisest counselor of all” – Pericles ~ Take good care ~ Terrell Deb M January 12, 2025 at 5:00 PM Now l must say l do like that title Terrell….Lady Deb has a nice ring to it and is very fitting l do believe haha!! Yes, time is the wisest counsellor of all! Thankyou Lord Terrell….Lady Debx

Bj Legros Kelley January 12, 2025 at 2:56 PM Oh yes, I can relate! The pros? Um, well, what are they again?? :) Deb M January 12, 2025 at 4:37 PM Hehe you made me smile sweet Bj…..thanks …Debx

Susan Ashley January 11, 2025 at 9:16 AM Dear Deb, those damn "cons"! They "put me to the test" too. I delight in knowing I am not alone as your poem so "gracefully" alludes. A wonderful rhyme that makes my day :) In this case, I'm a firm believer in misery loves company haha! Thank you for sharing, my wonderful poet friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan Deb M January 12, 2025 at 4:48 PM Susan….l always feel quite honoured when you visit my poems and leave a comment…..as l have said before ( but will say again haha!) l consider you one of the top poets on P.S.. l so appreciate your thoughts lovely Susan! Debx

Heidi Sands January 11, 2025 at 6:20 AM So true Deb. Yes, many can relate. ..and battling those cons to stay positive :) Deb M January 12, 2025 at 4:42 PM Hi Heidi….you know well about battling those cons with all you have suffered and been through. I hope with each day you feel better and stay strong and positive! Cuddles…Debx

Jan Allison January 11, 2025 at 4:45 AM thanks for the smiles Deb, a poem many of us can relate to especially the 'con' lol:-) hugs Jan xx Deb M January 11, 2025 at 5:07 AM How wonderful to see you Jan….l have missed your P.S presence!! Thanks my friend…Debx

Paul Willason January 11, 2025 at 3:27 AM Will take your advice Deb....though my old bones groan to remind me that there is not much grace in a bent back and a arthritic shuffle. Cheers my friend... Deb M January 12, 2025 at 4:39 PM Arthritic Shuffle is that a new dance craze Paul haha! I love your comment…..thanks my dear friend! Debx