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Graceful Movement of Silence



The leaf of my love fell
in quiet autumn silence
Slowly descending 
from the swaying limb
of unanticipated romantic tremors
Caught off balance was
my sense of equlibrium
Shaken by the sight
of a canvas beauty come to life,
I was shook loose from my branch 
of librarian solitude
And the twirling leaf of my love
fell so softly into the lap of her open book ... 
as she turned the page silently
Thinking,
contemplating ...
She wrote a beautiful passage
in her diary
about me entering her life
with quiet grace
Describing me as a brightly
burnished leaf with the markings
of a tiger lily butterfly,
she said I floated by her 
nearly unnoticed — 
Until she had to turn the page 
of her life
And a slight, silent gust from the 
wind of change
caused me to quietly fall into her view

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 11/22/2017 12:48:00 PM
WoW! Freddie, This is poetry at it's finest. It was sooo romantic and breathtaking. I loved the metaphors and imagery in this well written piece. I'm left in awe of your gift:-) Alexis
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Date: 10/31/2017 8:18:00 AM
This is absolutely majestic. It is fluid poetry in motion and I hope you entered it in the diary contest because it is surely a winner. I agree with g. A fave. Let me additionally add that you are a gifted romantic, free verse bard.
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