Graceful Deer -- Tanka Contest

Deer are so pretty
As they stand against the snow
And they are graceful 
As they leap over fences
To come to the stream and drink
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Chircop Avatar
January 30, 2013 at 7:04 AM
aww..yep.i love love deer..Unfortunately on the island of Malta We dont have them.First time i saw them was in Scothland...I wanted to get out of the car to catch them and hug them..but gee how they ran:).Lovely tanka
Dietrich Avatar
January 12, 2013 at 10:18 PM
yes, they are so lovely and especially to see them outside your window in the snow!! nice poem!
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