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Grace of 42

When the time is right for the child of laughter
Look on all corruption of love from anger
Place yourself in hands that could end the madness 
Fade into graceful

allegoryartsapphic stanza

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Lucinda Bulger

April 9, 2009 at 7:38 PM

Hi Yoni, I was very upset when I previously commented on this write of yours. Now with a second read and time, I find it quite the inspirational piece and very wise words indeed. Thanks to you for sharing this piece, it is inspirationally, real life pieces as these that makes the soup a great place to read at. Got back early from my vacation, but I am rested, some of the works I deleted were saved by my editor, a few of my spiritual ones, which to me is the most important. :) God bless, Lucinda

Michael Jordan

March 22, 2009 at 3:04 AM

Yoni - This short poem sure packs a profound message - You know I'm in my late 40s and I have found peace for the first time in my life - Loved this poem - God Bless, MJ

Arany P.

March 21, 2009 at 5:41 AM

well said! i wouldn't agree any less.. ~ Arany

Kristin Reynolds

March 21, 2009 at 2:10 AM

Beautiful sentiment, Yoni, very soothing; like a balm. love, Kristin

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

March 20, 2009 at 8:18 PM

Dear Yoni, I have to say I had to look up the Form and still do not know completely how this this " Sapphic stanza " works I just read the words and think Grace over darkness Let me know Thank-YOU for YOUR encouraging and inquisitive comments LOVE ALWAYS...HG

Lucinda Bulger

March 20, 2009 at 6:09 PM

Yes, I agree with this to a point, of course, to uncover lies, there is nothing wrong with truth. So, as to the Lord to soften my heart will be a grand thing to me.... and I do not take lightly anyone's words, I measure them with intent. This intent of this write is a beautiful work. I like it alot.