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Grace of 42

When the time is right for the child of laughter Look on all corruption of love from anger Place yourself in hands that could end the madness Fade into graceful

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Lucinda Bulger

Date: 4/9/2009 7:38:00 PM

Hi Yoni, I was very upset when I previously commented on this write of yours. Now with a second read and time, I find it quite the inspirational piece and very wise words indeed. Thanks to you for sharing this piece, it is inspirationally, real life pieces as these that makes the soup a great place to read at. Got back early from my vacation, but I am rested, some of the works I deleted were saved by my editor, a few of my spiritual ones, which to me is the most important. :) God bless, Lucinda

Michael Jordan

Date: 3/22/2009 3:04:00 AM

Yoni - This short poem sure packs a profound message - You know I'm in my late 40s and I have found peace for the first time in my life - Loved this poem - God Bless, MJ

Arany P.

Date: 3/21/2009 5:41:00 AM

well said! i wouldn't agree any less.. ~ Arany

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 3/21/2009 2:10:00 AM

Beautiful sentiment, Yoni, very soothing; like a balm. love, Kristin

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 3/20/2009 8:18:00 PM

Dear Yoni, I have to say I had to look up the Form and still do not know completely how this this " Sapphic stanza " works I just read the words and think Grace over darkness Let me know Thank-YOU for YOUR encouraging and inquisitive comments LOVE ALWAYS...HG

Lucinda Bulger

Date: 3/20/2009 6:09:00 PM

Yes, I agree with this to a point, of course, to uncover lies, there is nothing wrong with truth. So, as to the Lord to soften my heart will be a grand thing to me.... and I do not take lightly anyone's words, I measure them with intent. This intent of this write is a beautiful work. I like it alot.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/20/2009 5:54:00 PM

True message, Yoni, and well stated. It is far better to deal gracefully with adversity than it is to resort to "madness." Very inspirational!