Grace

The mystique of the moon
shone brightly and far
she was deep in thought
gazing longingly at the stars.

He told her he cared
that she was his only one
his actions so bold so brazenly raw
she cries in earnest to the heavens above.

She gave him her love
they made solemn vows
to always be truthful
to be present here and now.

The betrayal she felt
stung like hard bullets of rain
the cold stark image
as vivid as a blood red stain.

How could he lay with
forsaking their bond
with her friend her confidante
whom she had trusted for so long.

So now in the moonlight
gently stroking her belly
she ponders her future
and the new lives developing.

She smiles and feels
a small nudge from within
a loving reminder
she is carrying their twins.

It is at this moment 
under the mystique of the moon
she knows in her heart
exactly what she must do.

To forgive and love wholly
she decides is her fate
for who on this earth
could not use a little grace.

















reworked 08-09-2016
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Inman Avatar
August 21, 2019 at 8:12 AM
A sad situation, but a very well written poem.
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 23, 2017 at 12:43 AM
This is beautifully written Lynn and especially a poem I can relate to. Soup mail. Outstanding! : )
Devnath  Avatar
May 9, 2017 at 3:45 PM
Firstly thanks for your earlier comments to my poems. Sorry for late. i will read yours and comment too. This is a very heartfelt tragic poem read from you beautifully expressed my dear lovely friend. A 7 sure. Loved always, bl
Pinet Avatar
April 12, 2017 at 9:11 AM
A marvelous display of emotions as one is led upon a trail of magic moments lost and gained, each encased as a golden nugget or a dagger within the authors heart. Emile.
Dietrich Avatar
March 10, 2017 at 8:30 PM
Lynn, you are very wise to have the woman in this poem decide on the path of love and forgiveness. What a bittersweet poem.
Callus Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 8:49 AM
Such a sad situation, Lynn. It's not just the cheating part, but also the fact that she was pregnant! To forgive is commendable, though there is no guarantee that he will be ending his wayward life! Best regards ~ paul
Raven Avatar
August 14, 2016 at 8:35 PM
Hi Lynn, an emotional write from beginnng to end. It is so sad when you give everything and then when the joy should be complete and then infedility steps in. You have really told this story well. In the end positivity. What matters is the child she carries. The bond between child and mother begins in the womb. Excellent write Lynn. Hugs....Mike. XX. This is a definite seven.
Lamoureux Avatar
August 11, 2016 at 7:58 AM
A heartbreaking story with a hope of redemption. I have witnessed God transform a man like this into a loving husband and father. With God all things are truly possible.
Lamoureux Avatar
August 11, 2016 at 7:58 AM
I'm glad that for you this is fictional.
Hagy Avatar
August 10, 2016 at 5:46 PM
Beautiful write Lynn, and a great message...love your line "under the mystique of the moon
Y. Avatar
August 10, 2016 at 2:17 PM
Hi Lynn, I must say your title alone caught my attention. However, I didn't know I was going to read such a heartbreaking story.Infidelity is the ultimate betrayal, its even worse if it's with a best friend. At the end the day those twins is the most important thing. I agree,we all need grace but to what extent? Will the one who committed adultery do it again? Good write from start to finish . A without a doubt seven:-) Alexis
Allison Avatar
August 10, 2016 at 12:22 AM
Infidelity when someone is pregnant isn't that uncommon ... the ultimate betrayal between a partner and a 'best' friend where trust needs to be regained but mistakes do happen and I have to agree with Tim and Daniel's comments... if this hurdle can be overcome then it is what is best for the children:-) hugs jan xx7
Turner Avatar
August 9, 2016 at 7:34 PM
As sad as it may sound, it is a hard lesson to learn but sometimes the people we love make mistakes. It only becomes a problem when they take advantage of your goodness. Great write, I've been there!
Marie Avatar
August 9, 2016 at 8:00 PM
sad to hear you've been there. if only our pens could erase the hurt... i really appreciate your comments and time. lynn
Smith Avatar
August 9, 2016 at 6:34 PM
A hard decision to make but one that must be made in the best interest of the children...lovely Lynn
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