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Grace

Neglecting spouse
on tempting lover 
lavished 
champagne and roses
luxury car... caviars
blue pearls on satin
perfumed embracing
on burning sands 
of passion 
on meadows bed
asleep in arms 
of vices
deadness hidden
by green 
of wrapping vines
like tree 
when dead twice
night of heat
turned ice
from corpse 
in horror 
running
weightless will 
untrained to resist
sucked in by vacuum 
despairing  in 
God's mercy
immersed in pride
to pay unpaid bill
Love required
on its descent to fire
looked up to see
resplendent more 
than sun
The Spouse
springtime of ages
reflecting in her gaze
opening gate
of Paradise 
her smile
divine
then shutting.

Sixth Place Winner: Brian Strand-No 1240 Unplaced-9/2/23

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Date: 9/3/2023 5:12:00 PM
Incredible imagery and descriptive writing! Congrats on your win, Frances! Blessings, Kim M
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