Ralph Sergi Poet Tetractys

Gourmand--Tet

Gourmand - TET

Sight
Smells Good
Tastes good too
Let me touch it
My four senses all like the beef jerky

My fifth sense hears the complaints of my choice
What do I care
it's sole food
old shoes
choose

Tetractys This Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Charles Messina
April 25, 2019

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Eve Roper May 7, 2019 at 4:11 PM Congratulations on your Tetractys form win. Hugs eve Ralph Sergi May 18, 2019 at 9:08 PM carpe diem done over Ralph Sergi May 7, 2019 at 7:08 PM Thank you, Eve

Andrea Dietrich May 4, 2019 at 2:36 PM so quirky this is. Sole food. Love that!!

Alexis Y. May 4, 2019 at 9:13 AM Hi Ralph, I enjoyed reading your humorous write. You did well in the Tetractys form. Congratulations on a well deserved win:-) Alexis Ralph Sergi May 18, 2019 at 9:09 PM carpe diem done over

Anne-Lise Andresen May 4, 2019 at 8:21 AM - Congratulations on your great winning poem, Ralph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charles Messina May 4, 2019 at 7:37 AM Love this humorous write, Ralph. Congratulations on your win my friend. Charlie Ralph Sergi May 4, 2019 at 7:44 AM Thank you for the placement, Charles. By the way, speaking of your last name, my father was born in Messina, Sicily, Italy

Judy Ball April 30, 2019 at 1:33 AM A fun and clever write Ralph. I'm not very good with forms. Really like this though. God Bless and good luck in the contest. JB

Connie Marcum Wong April 28, 2019 at 12:32 PM A clever creation for this contest Ralph. I loved it! : )

Allen Beilschmidt Sr. April 27, 2019 at 4:18 PM 'Sole food' Very witty Ralph Sergi April 28, 2019 at 8:23 AM Hi Allen: Thank you. I like to instill humor in many of my poems

Joseph May April 26, 2019 at 8:30 PM I like the 'sole food' line...Very nicely done Ralph.. Ralph Sergi April 27, 2019 at 7:48 AM Thank you, Joseph As a kid , it used to taste like that.

Janice Canerdy April 26, 2019 at 8:23 PM Good one, Ralph. Janice Ralph Sergi April 27, 2019 at 7:48 AM Thank you, Janice

M. L. Kiser April 26, 2019 at 6:40 PM A very well penned tetractys; good luck in the contest. Ralph Sergi April 28, 2019 at 7:28 AM hank you, M.L. Ralph Sergi April 28, 2019 at 7:28 AM Thank you, M.L.

Eve Roper April 26, 2019 at 5:32 PM Very creative, Ralph, my boys would love this.. I am not a jerky person , but my husband was and my children are.. Grandpa Roper use to make it out of deer and elk .. good luck in the contest. hugs eve

Andrea Dietrich April 26, 2019 at 5:12 PM oh how fun. Maybe I should do one on food too!!!