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Gothic Loneliness


Darksome night and shining moon,
hearken to her echo In blue...
fragmanted woods spreading aroma..
The scars of my karma turn erotica... 
She didnt fly she is coming down...
A faithful eve, wearing a black gown..
I was born in love with thee,
So why this world stands in between..?
I am her posession, She is my darkness..
Oh how I wish this world to embrace..
 I hate this blood soaked field of glory,
I am grateful to her for this soliditary..
A tiny grain of ego, lust and lies...
Divinity told her to break the ice...
Seeing world in such postition...
Universe laugh for the  final perdition...
She blessed me with divine words,
Which never connects me with this world...!

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Beata Agustin

Date: 12/6/2024 8:21:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/16/2016 11:32:00 PM

Nice to see this one again, Sarah. LINDA

Skat A

Date: 1/14/2016 11:04:00 PM

SARAH, Awesome write, I really like this. Forever ** SKAT **

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/5/2015 10:38:00 PM

SARAH, Thank you for the sweet reply to my comment. Have yourself a Happy Easter Love LINDA

Funom Makama

Date: 2/6/2015 8:00:00 AM

Reading your pages brings enjoyment and ease at heart. I love your style of craft and this is definitely a 7 for me.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 10/3/2014 8:22:00 AM

inriguins at first as i have my first read but as i go along i understand it more.. :) thoughtful and one good take.. I like best your third line.. :)kudos!

Sarah Bhurgari
Date: 10/3/2014 3:13:00 PM

Dear Olive, I am honored :)

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/2/2014 4:41:00 PM

Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Sarah Bhurgari
Date: 10/2/2014 4:55:00 PM

Thank you Debbie :)

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 10/2/2014 3:23:00 PM

I am entranced by this masterful piece..."fragmanted woods spreading aroma.." I really like the atmosphere you have painted with the dark shades I so love... very nice.. congrats on your placement. Always, Laura

Sarah Bhurgari
Date: 10/2/2014 3:35:00 PM

Loads of love laura. I am glad to have such encouraging fellows around me. Your words mean allot to me and very motivating for me to continue my journey of finding pearls of literature within me to portray a beautiful write up for you friends. Thanks a tonne :)

Justin Bordner

Date: 10/2/2014 1:59:00 PM

Romantic and apocolyptic love from above, Muse in Divine struggle, take the battle, the glory and the enlightening pain, together a warrior feather, making a beautiful survivor Sarah. " I hate this blood soaked feild of glory...I was born in love with thee..." rich lovin soul Sarah...J.A.B. A FAVORITE!

Sarah Bhurgari
Date: 10/2/2014 3:14:00 PM

Dear Justin your words motivate me to keep up writing no matter what. Thank you so much dear friend You inspire me :)

Jan Allison

Date: 10/2/2014 10:20:00 AM

deep and dark and beautifully penned many congrats on your win:-) hugs janx xx

Sarah Bhurgari
Date: 10/2/2014 3:17:00 PM

Each individual possesses a whole universe inside their souls, Find yours and you will write much more better than this dear friend :)

Jan Allison
Date: 10/2/2014 11:19:00 AM

I could never pen anything like this - am in awe my friend! Hugs Jan xxx

Sarah Bhurgari
Date: 10/2/2014 11:17:00 AM

Thanks a tonne dear friend. You inspire me :)

Charlene Wilcox

Date: 10/2/2014 7:48:00 AM

Very Beautiful and I was just in awe over this One-Nice Job-Keep up the skills-Congratulations on The Huge Win...Your New Friend-Char

Sarah Bhurgari
Date: 10/2/2014 11:18:00 AM

I am honored dear friend. :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/2/2014 5:25:00 AM

Nicely penned emotional write, congrats. sarah

Sarah Bhurgari
Date: 10/2/2014 11:19:00 AM

Thank you so much. You are very kind and supportive.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/24/2014 5:05:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Sarah - I choose your first lovely written poem - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Sarah Bhurgari
Date: 10/2/2014 3:46:00 PM

Thanks allot dear friend for being so kind and supportive :)

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 9/23/2014 1:05:00 AM

really love how you drew this excellent piece

Sarah Bhurgari
Date: 10/2/2014 3:41:00 PM

A bundle of thanks my dear friend :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/22/2014 8:08:00 PM

Sarah, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Sarah Bhurgari
Date: 10/2/2014 3:47:00 PM

Thank you dear friend :)