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The orange juice was being sold
At quite a nifty price.
I bought a few containers,
Feeling proud, not thinking twice.

But something made me double-check,
Since looks would not suffice,
And that is when I noticed
What I don’t think’s very nice.

Each orange juice container,
Looking normal, to entice,
Was a bunch of ounces smaller,
So I offer this advice:

When a bargain is presented,
You can always roll the dice,
But from corporate America,
There’ll be no sacrifice.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Krutsinger Avatar
May 18, 2021 at 2:00 PM
You can say this six more times "But from corporate America, There’ll be no sacrifice."
Allison Avatar
May 17, 2021 at 1:22 PM
Its so infuriating and the consumer is not stupid at the way they market these products:-( hugs jan xx
Mcleod Avatar
May 15, 2021 at 11:33 AM
Hi Ilene. I once saw this done and they had the nerve to write on the package now with less packaging....like they put less in it for the cause of the environment. LOL Trevor
Mchattie Avatar
May 14, 2021 at 4:58 PM
Everything is more expensive as the servings keep getting smaller. Well penned. A very clever piece indeed. Have a great day my friend.
Leffanta Avatar
May 16, 2021 at 11:28 AM
Spot on! Compare the size of a 1940s Hershey bar/Graham cracker/Twinky with one today and no one will feel sorry for corporate America today!
Green Avatar
May 14, 2021 at 3:04 PM
You've got that right. Buy one, get one free but we'll charge you double for the first. Nicely done Ilene. I see you haven't lost your poetic touch.
Andresen Avatar
May 14, 2021 at 12:16 PM
- It's always wise to double check, Ilene :) - Have a wonderful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Leffanta Avatar
May 14, 2021 at 11:58 AM
Unfortunately, many seniors are unable to read the small print! I have purchased groceries six-weeks beyond expiration date from major chains, so always carrying reading glasses when shopping! Aloha! Rico
Hankins Avatar
May 14, 2021 at 8:21 AM
Unfortunately, this is so true, Ilene. Always double-check. If it seems to be too good, it probably isn't!
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