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Gossamer cobweb
 glistens with
 early morning dew




Spider poised
ready
to entrap
unwary victim

Paint A Picture - 7 Lines Poetry Contest


Sponsor: Joseph May

09/24/20

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Paul Callus

October 2, 2020 at 8:14 AM

Back with deserved congratulations, Jan...well done! Hugs // paul

Jennifer Proxenos

October 2, 2020 at 4:53 AM

Back with congrats Jan on you top win! I knew it! Hugs and blessings. Jennifer

John Watt

October 1, 2020 at 8:56 AM

Congratulations on your top win, Jan! This being an international poetry site makes your poem a world-wide web. Hugs ~ John

Linda Alice Fowler

October 1, 2020 at 5:27 AM

Congratulations Jan! Nice one! Linda

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 1, 2020 at 5:09 AM

- Congratulations on your win, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May

October 1, 2020 at 4:14 AM

Very nicely donev Jan, Congrats on your win..

John Watt

September 27, 2020 at 2:36 PM

Wonderful image and imagery. Go get those bugs, spider! GL in the contest. Hugs ~ John

Mark Koplin

September 26, 2020 at 5:39 AM

Well done Jan!

Harry Horsman

September 24, 2020 at 9:49 PM

Oh, This is so good, Jan, love it.

Gershon Wolf

September 24, 2020 at 4:48 PM

Everything great here. G.L. in the contest, Jan! :) gw

Paul Callus

September 24, 2020 at 2:18 PM

A very good example of the Septolet form, Jan...vivid imagery! gl in the contest. Hugs // paul

Jan Allison

September 28, 2020 at 5:33 AM

Ive never seen the form before Paul:-) hugs jan xx

Ilene Bauer

September 24, 2020 at 2:11 PM

great title for this very descriptive poem, jan! good luck in the contest...

Jan Allison

September 28, 2020 at 5:32 AM

thanks Ilene:-) hugs jan xx

Heidi Sands

September 24, 2020 at 12:13 PM

Nice one Jan. Great description of 'Gotcha'! :)

Jan Allison

September 24, 2020 at 12:15 PM

thanks Heidi:-) hugs jan xx

Caren Krutsinger

September 24, 2020 at 8:29 AM

Enjoyed the poem and the photo; great match up!

Jan Allison

September 24, 2020 at 8:37 AM

thanks Caren:-) hugs jan xx

Jennifer Proxenos

September 24, 2020 at 6:55 AM

What an awesome description of a cobweb - for sure a win. Beautiful Jan. Hugs, and blessings, Jennifer.

Jan Allison

September 24, 2020 at 8:29 AM

thanks Jennifer:-) hugs jan xx

Victor Buhagiar

September 24, 2020 at 6:14 AM

Appreciate your wonderful description, Jan. I feel it will rate high. ~~

Jan Allison

September 24, 2020 at 8:29 AM

thanks Victor i love to see the cobwebs with the dew but not the actual spider!:-) hugs jan xx

Jenna Logan

September 24, 2020 at 5:18 AM

You might've used a pen instead of a brush to paint your vivid imagery, but you did it perfectly. Well written, Jan.

Jan Allison

September 24, 2020 at 5:41 AM

Thanks Jenna:-) i appreciate your comment:-) hugs jan xx

Regina Mcintosh

September 24, 2020 at 4:40 AM

This is a wonderful entry, jan... I love it. It's a sure winner. God bless you with all your heart's desires. Love, Gina

Jan Allison

September 24, 2020 at 4:41 AM

Thanks Regina, its amazing what a picture you can create in so few words:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

September 24, 2020 at 4:08 AM

- It's beautiful, Jan :) - Luck in the contest :) - A win for sure :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

September 24, 2020 at 10:45 AM

:)))

Jan Allison

September 24, 2020 at 4:09 AM

thanks Anne-Lise I love seeing spider's webs but not the spider / / / / 0 0 \ \ \ \ :-( hugs jan xx

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