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Gossamer cobweb glistens with early morning dew Spider poised ready to entrap unwary victim Paint A Picture - 7 Lines Poetry Contest Sponsor: Joseph May 09/24/20

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Paul Callus

Date: 10/2/2020 8:14:00 AM

Back with deserved congratulations, Jan...well done! Hugs // paul

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 10/2/2020 4:53:00 AM

Back with congrats Jan on you top win! I knew it! Hugs and blessings. Jennifer

John Watt

Date: 10/1/2020 8:56:00 AM

Congratulations on your top win, Jan! This being an international poetry site makes your poem a world-wide web. Hugs ~ John

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 10/1/2020 5:27:00 AM

Congratulations Jan! Nice one! Linda

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/1/2020 5:09:00 AM

- Congratulations on your win, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May

Date: 10/1/2020 4:14:00 AM

Very nicely donev Jan, Congrats on your win..

John Watt

Date: 9/27/2020 2:36:00 PM

Wonderful image and imagery. Go get those bugs, spider! GL in the contest. Hugs ~ John

Mark Koplin

Date: 9/26/2020 5:39:00 AM

Well done Jan!

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/24/2020 9:49:00 PM

Oh, This is so good, Jan, love it.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/24/2020 4:48:00 PM

Everything great here. G.L. in the contest, Jan! :) gw

Paul Callus

Date: 9/24/2020 2:18:00 PM

A very good example of the Septolet form, Jan...vivid imagery! gl in the contest. Hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 9/28/2020 5:33:00 AM

Ive never seen the form before Paul:-) hugs jan xx

Ilene Bauer

Date: 9/24/2020 2:11:00 PM

great title for this very descriptive poem, jan! good luck in the contest...

Jan Allison
Date: 9/28/2020 5:32:00 AM

thanks Ilene:-) hugs jan xx

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/24/2020 12:13:00 PM

Nice one Jan. Great description of 'Gotcha'! :)

Jan Allison
Date: 9/24/2020 12:15:00 PM

thanks Heidi:-) hugs jan xx

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 9/24/2020 8:29:00 AM

Enjoyed the poem and the photo; great match up!

Jan Allison
Date: 9/24/2020 8:37:00 AM

thanks Caren:-) hugs jan xx

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 9/24/2020 6:55:00 AM

What an awesome description of a cobweb - for sure a win. Beautiful Jan. Hugs, and blessings, Jennifer.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/24/2020 8:29:00 AM

thanks Jennifer:-) hugs jan xx

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/24/2020 6:14:00 AM

Appreciate your wonderful description, Jan. I feel it will rate high. ~~

Jan Allison
Date: 9/24/2020 8:29:00 AM

thanks Victor i love to see the cobwebs with the dew but not the actual spider!:-) hugs jan xx

Jenna Logan

Date: 9/24/2020 5:18:00 AM

You might've used a pen instead of a brush to paint your vivid imagery, but you did it perfectly. Well written, Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/24/2020 5:41:00 AM

Thanks Jenna:-) i appreciate your comment:-) hugs jan xx

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 9/24/2020 4:40:00 AM

This is a wonderful entry, jan... I love it. It's a sure winner. God bless you with all your heart's desires. Love, Gina

Jan Allison
Date: 9/24/2020 4:41:00 AM

Thanks Regina, its amazing what a picture you can create in so few words:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/24/2020 4:08:00 AM

- It's beautiful, Jan :) - Luck in the contest :) - A win for sure :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/24/2020 10:45:00 AM

:)))

Jan Allison
Date: 9/24/2020 4:09:00 AM

thanks Anne-Lise I love seeing spider's webs but not the spider / / / / 0 0 \ \ \ \ :-( hugs jan xx