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Gordy, my neighbor, used to play well-planned Outrageous pranks, his fun at my expense. Then I devised a scheme, rather bland Compared to his wild ones. In my defense, He deserved this gift! I relaxed and watched nearby As my victim devoured that homemade chocolate pie September 1, 2021 entered in the Message in an Acrostic 2 premiere contest placed 6th Sponsor: Kim Rodrigues

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Date: 9/18/2021 4:49:00 AM
OMG, Janice, you hidden ,message killed me! Congrats as well on your placement with this gem! Happy Saturday
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Date: 9/18/2021 4:23:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... Both the obvious and hidden messages are laughter-triggering. God bless you.
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Date: 9/17/2021 4:26:00 PM
In one end out the other - ha ha congrats
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Date: 9/17/2021 1:23:00 PM
ha ha ha love it many congrats Janice:-) hugs Jan xx
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 9/17/2021 2:04:00 PM
Thanks a million, Jan! Janice
Date: 9/17/2021 11:18:00 AM
Looks like Gordy will learn how to "run" the minute mile! Congratulations on your very witty write. :s
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 9/17/2021 2:05:00 PM
I bet he will. Thanks a million, Sam! Janice
Date: 9/16/2021 8:12:00 PM
Watch out Gordy! That homemade pie is "more" than delicious. LOL. Congratulations, Janice!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 9/17/2021 7:56:00 AM
Kim, thanks a million for sponsoring and for my win! Janice
Date: 9/2/2021 12:19:00 PM
Hello Janice Canerdy, He devoured a whold chocolate pie! Wowe! Hugs.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/3/2021 11:01:00 AM
Hello Janice, to devour a whole pie is crazy. One slice at a time is better. Your welcome . Hugs.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 9/2/2021 8:18:00 PM
Thanks, Darlene. Janice
Date: 9/2/2021 4:48:00 AM
He got his just desserts, :)
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 9/2/2021 7:04:00 AM
Indeed! Thanks so much, Joseph. Janice
Date: 9/2/2021 1:25:00 AM
Ha ha, he sure got his share of pie:) clever, Janice:)
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 9/2/2021 7:04:00 AM
LOL! Thanks so much, Jo. Janice
Date: 9/1/2021 11:35:00 PM
I won't be playing pranks on you Janice lol. Good luck in the contest Tom
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 9/2/2021 7:04:00 AM
LOL! Thanks so much, Tom. Janice

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