Gossamer in Grey - Hiku 31 -

Written: August  02, 2025, for contest by Brian Strand

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Kerr Avatar
August 5, 2025 at 12:44 AM
Congratulations Sotto,’ on your selection with this thoroughly original design, theme, and sparkling concept. Amazing peak and trough. Thanks for your comment on my entry Howard
Guptar Avatar
August 4, 2025 at 12:00 PM
Congratulations dear poet on your top win in this contest with a high pitched Haiku on "shoemaker`s Monday" as it is called locally. Wishing you plenty of energy for crafting your gems.
Dietrich Avatar
August 4, 2025 at 11:18 AM
I am getting better at deciphering these now. Great job and congrats.
Fleming Avatar
August 3, 2025 at 5:01 AM
Cleverly constructed! :) john
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 2, 2025 at 4:51 PM
well done, Sir! The first line grabbed my attention...ergophobia gnaws. !!! wishing you a pleasant evening, Sara
Hind Avatar
August 2, 2025 at 2:35 PM
A haunting haiku truly.
Sheehan Avatar
August 2, 2025 at 12:38 PM
Fantastic haiku. It captures the essence. Nice graphics.
Dietrich Avatar
August 2, 2025 at 8:17 AM
I used to feel this way on Mondays. Now I work only Tuesday till Thursday so I no longer hate Mondays! Fun read
George Avatar
August 2, 2025 at 3:34 AM
After the relaxed weekend, the thought of going to work on Mondays makes some people so vexed and anxious, especially those who find their work taxing and laborsome. Great graphic representation and great haiku. All the Best, dear Lasaad.
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