Gossamer Dream

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Gossamer wings, flutter across my dreams this night; around my memories are gauzy rings, I follow with delight ! Oh, all the beautiful and the sad are entwined, the ups and downs- the sweet and ugly intertwined; my tangled vast journey defined, and I wake to sunshine that a gentle breeze brings ! _______________________ February 2, 2020 Poetry/Rhyme/Gossamer Dream Copyright Protected, ID 20-1222-525-03 All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France Written for the contest, Premier IV sponsor, Rob Carmack Ninth Place

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/14/2020 12:32:00 AM

so glad that Rob liked this one as much as I do. Congrats, Dear Heart.

Constance La France
Date: 2/14/2020 9:23:00 AM

Andrea, thanks for the congrats, i am happy he liked it too _Constance

Charles Messina

Date: 2/11/2020 4:32:00 AM

Beautiful, Constance. Congratulations on your placement in Rob's contest!

Constance La France
Date: 2/11/2020 10:00:00 AM

Charles, thanks for the congratulations and the beautiful _Constance

Rob Carmack

Date: 2/11/2020 2:09:00 AM

Hey Constance. Congrats on your win.

Constance La France
Date: 2/11/2020 10:01:00 AM

Rob, thanks for the contest and for my placement, very honored _Constance

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/2/2020 1:35:00 PM

Very nice!

Constance La France
Date: 2/3/2020 8:39:00 AM

Kim, thanks for visiting with the compliment _Constance

Constance La France

Date: 2/2/2020 12:06:00 PM

Hi friends, this poem is written in my created form called Crumbling Rhyme, 8 lines, 4/8/10/6/12/12/8/12 syllables, a/b/a/b/c/c/c/a rhyme pattern and indented lines of -14/8/6/8/2/2/4/2 _Constance