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Gossamer Dream

Gossamer wings,
         flutter across my dreams this night;
      around my memories are gauzy rings,
         I follow with delight !
  Oh, all the beautiful and the sad are entwined,
  the ups and downs-  the sweet and ugly intertwined;
     my tangled vast journey defined,
  and I wake to sunshine that a gentle breeze brings !

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February 2, 2020


Poetry/Rhyme/Gossamer Dream
Copyright Protected, ID 20-1222-525-03
All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France


Written for the contest, Premier IV
sponsor, Rob Carmack

Ninth Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Dietrich Avatar
February 14, 2020 at 12:32 AM
so glad that Rob liked this one as much as I do. Congrats, Dear Heart.
La France Avatar
February 14, 2020 at 9:23 AM
Andrea, thanks for the congrats, i am happy he liked it too _Constance
Messina Avatar
February 11, 2020 at 4:32 AM
Beautiful, Constance. Congratulations on your placement in Rob's contest!
La France Avatar
February 11, 2020 at 10:00 AM
Charles, thanks for the congratulations and the beautiful _Constance
Carmack Avatar
February 11, 2020 at 2:09 AM
Hey Constance. Congrats on your win.
La France Avatar
February 11, 2020 at 10:01 AM
Rob, thanks for the contest and for my placement, very honored _Constance
Rodrigues Avatar
February 2, 2020 at 1:35 PM
Very nice!
La France Avatar
February 3, 2020 at 8:39 AM
Kim, thanks for visiting with the compliment _Constance
La France Avatar
February 2, 2020 at 12:06 PM
Hi friends, this poem is written in my created form called Crumbling Rhyme, 8 lines, 4/8/10/6/12/12/8/12 syllables, a/b/a/b/c/c/c/a rhyme pattern and indented lines of -14/8/6/8/2/2/4/2 _Constance
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