Gossamer Display

She glides in splendour along the fields with orange lace on rafters,well-hued by fragrant air as her waltzes roam to dazzle boughs thrilling a night's mood. On fancy tones, her music drools in rhythmic shimmer of wings aflight and she draws me towards a bright stage unto a rung of midsummer's height. Yet, when dusk floats with her velvet trail short-lived, the butterfly flutters by descending to rest on maple's palm; I weep for a beauty's swift goodbye.
Kelly Deschler's The Butterfly Flutters By

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 6/8/2014 8:27:00 PM
Nette, , Congratulations, in Kelly's Butterfly Fluttering By.. Sweet move... LINDA
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Date: 6/6/2014 5:51:00 AM
The beauty of your words flutters with the beat of the butterfly. At times I find myself wanting to weep when your beautiful poems end.
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Date: 6/4/2014 1:26:00 PM
Love the beautiful imagery...Nette, this is lovely. Congratulations!
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Date: 6/4/2014 7:48:00 AM
Congratulations on a beuatiful win!
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Date: 6/4/2014 6:46:00 AM
Wow! what a beautiful flight you have taken me on with this sensational poem, Nette. Many congrats on your win. bfn Lainie
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Date: 6/4/2014 6:40:00 AM
Wonderful write and great win, Congrats my friend!
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Date: 6/4/2014 2:26:00 AM
Congrats Nette...nicely done. A well-deserved win...must be nice :)
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Date: 6/3/2014 10:07:00 PM
Very lovely write nette,,, tender n beautiful ! congrats on wonderful win dear !
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Date: 6/3/2014 8:09:00 PM
I loved how you described her elegant dance and flight through the evening sky. A truly beautiful write, Nette! Congratulations on your first place win!.... I'm glad that I reopened the contest for you. Thank you for this wonderful poem!
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Date: 6/1/2014 10:55:00 PM
Words that paint a winged beauty vividly my friend!! Bravoooooo!!!!!!!
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Date: 5/28/2014 10:18:00 AM
Well, this poem is a wonder. You captured the magical essence of a butterfly!
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Date: 5/27/2014 7:52:00 PM
Beautiful, Nette...a sure win. I raised Monarch caterpillars several times and it was so interesting and inspiring. I got to see one make the chrysalis and a couple emerge. I kept them in my house; someday I hope to write about the experience. Thanks for visiting my poems.
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Date: 5/27/2014 1:51:00 PM
Awesome uplifting write Nette! Good luck..
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Date: 5/27/2014 1:08:00 PM
- Nette my friend, this is just beautiful!! - Good luck in the contest! - (One more winning poem :) - All the best to you - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/27/2014 11:13:00 AM
You capture the essence of the butterfly so beautifully, dear nette. A top winner for sure. And... thank you for your kind comments today. Lainie
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