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Gossamer Bead

                   Enchants woods in valley of mist,
                               Glides from heaven's womb to exist,
                
                                         Life pours from sky.

                   Shimmers in eyes my dreams and tears,
                                Hums at nights fading my dark fears,
                                    
                                           Drop of goodbye.

                    Celestial bead in tiny palms,
                                Glimpses of divine loop of realms,

                                             Reborn to fly.



May 29, 2020

Triple Stanza Couplet Tail-Rhyme Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Charles Messina
~Winner: 2nd Place

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Gary Smith Date: 7/7/2020 6:03:00 AM Lovely poem Aditi, congrats. :) Login to Reply Aditi Mishra Date: 7/7/2020 10:08:00 AM Thank you for your visit and kind appreciation Gary :)

Charles Messina Date: 7/2/2020 5:44:00 AM Wonderful write, Aditi. Great imagery.. Congratulations on your win! Blessings Charlie Login to Reply Aditi Mishra Date: 7/4/2020 2:43:00 PM Thank you for your appreciation and for my placement in your contest Charles :) Blessings

Caren Krutsinger Date: 6/2/2020 2:15:00 AM Delicately delightful; your image so gorgeous. Login to Reply Aditi Mishra Date: 6/2/2020 3:38:00 AM Thank you so much for appreciating Caren :)

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/31/2020 5:38:00 PM gorgeous!! You are SO good, Aditi! Login to Reply Aditi Mishra Date: 5/31/2020 11:08:00 PM Glad you loved it Andrea. Thank you for your generous words :)

John Watt Date: 5/31/2020 2:01:00 AM I am enjoying the poetic subleties of these words and emotions they evoke. I feel stanza one describes either rain or clouds, stanza two describes tears, but I can't quite get stanza three, please help me to understand it? You know I love your poetry. Blessings, my friend ~ John Login to Reply John Watt Date: 5/31/2020 5:36:00 PM Thank you for your kind explanation. It greatly adds to my understanding of the three drops you were aiming for. Your exquisite poem inspired me to try one in a similar vein, using a theme with three connected stanzas. I should be posting in the next day or two. Thank you for inspiring! Aditi Mishra Date: 5/31/2020 2:17:00 AM Glad you enjoy my words dear friend. You are right. I have tried to blend the various forms of a drop, the first one symbolizes raindrop or a drop from mother's womb that gives life, the second one is a teardrop post sadness or death, the third one is the tiny bubble of a soul released after death that reflects the loop of life and death and gets reborn in some other body. Thank you for your generous appreciation :)

Caren Krutsinger Date: 5/30/2020 6:47:00 AM Ah, the poignant delicacy and deliciousness of this makes it an outstanding contender in any contest Aditi. Login to Reply Aditi Mishra Date: 5/30/2020 11:04:00 AM I am so glad by your generous words of appreciation and encouragement Caren. Thank you! God bless you :)

Vijay Pandit Date: 5/30/2020 6:18:00 AM Loved the imagery and rhythm of your words--beautifully written, as always, Aditi. Login to Reply Aditi Mishra Date: 5/30/2020 10:58:00 AM Glad you loved my words Vijay. Thak you so much for appreciating :)

Shirley Hawkins Date: 5/30/2020 5:12:00 AM A lovely enchanting poem. Thank you for sharing it Adita Good Luck in the contest ... Login to Reply Aditi Mishra Date: 5/30/2020 10:56:00 AM Thank you so much for appreciating and for your wishes Shirley. God bless you :)