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Gossamer threads—that's what's in the mind. Gossamer vines of the most significant kind Shining as if adorned with diamond rays. Or shattering beams through sapphire lays Our spirits are entangled in angelic dust. And green moss—our lives will forever adjust. What a day!—that's now turned to darkness. Moonshine and gossamer evade my harshness. In the stillness of the night, a tale unfolds. Etched in the body exertion is a story untold. A shape of remembrance, a whispering plea, An eerie mandala was grown, for all to foresee, Akin to the first leaf that gently falls, The story begins as darkness calls. Silent footsteps patter over the ground. Unveiling secrets is profound. The shape of remembrance etched in their hearts An eternal bond that time won't tear apart. The body exertion, a dance intertwined, Two souls entangled, their fates now aligned. With the light from the moon as its guide, The story reveals the truth it confides. In the stillness of the night, emotions ignite. Passion and longing are burning so bright. A shape of remembrance, a whispering plea, The ethereal quilt was built, for us to foresee.

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Date: 6/30/2023 9:07:00 PM
Congratulations on your top win in the Contest ...Sotto. A wonderful poem.
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Date: 6/30/2023 10:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely write/story/picture. Have a blessed day/weekend....................
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Date: 6/29/2023 8:30:00 PM
You have woven a beautiful and delicate gossamer web of memories with your wonderful words. I marvel at the threads of strong and passionate relationship with which you have woven this beautiful quilt. Congratulations on your first place win, dear poet friend.
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Date: 6/29/2023 2:56:00 PM
Beautiful words, lovely lines in your poem Sotto. Congratulations on your well deserved win in Constance’s contest… Belle
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Date: 6/29/2023 1:22:00 PM
Back to wish you congratulations on your well deserved win for this exceptionally beautul poem.
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Date: 6/24/2023 10:41:00 PM
Enchanting. Your words become the very essence of gosssmer. A lovely poem.
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Date: 6/24/2023 12:25:00 PM
Beautiful work, Sotto!!
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