Gorlizasaurs

We are Gorlizasaurs and have free rein,
To tear you apart so you’ll feel more pain
Than scorching in lava or acid rain.
And when we’re done, the few souls that remain 
Will then face the fiend that’s holding our chain.


For In 5 Lines or less contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Callus Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 2:28 PM
An impressive interpretation of the visual, David; also impressed by the rhyming scheme. Congrats on a worthy win. // paul
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November 8, 2015 at 9:44 PM
Congrats on ur awesome winning write David!
Dietrich Avatar
November 8, 2015 at 10:25 AM
I am reading many of these now, and this still remains one of my very favorites. I'd have put it higher!! Congrats for your win.
Sergi Avatar
November 8, 2015 at 10:10 AM
Hi David: Congratulations on your win!
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November 7, 2015 at 6:18 PM
David, Congratulations on your awesome win. I have a new blog up, "The Only Thing To Fear, Is Fear It'self" stop by and enjoy the winners and my explanation to all who join my contest. Truly enjoyed. Love SKAT
Artis Avatar
November 4, 2015 at 9:14 AM
I love the imagery:) Enjoyed reading it from top to bottom
Dietrich Avatar
November 2, 2015 at 3:28 PM
oohhhh, I REALLY LIKE THIS. facing the demon behind the chain. Very dark indeed!! One of my faves in this contest.
Dunn Avatar
November 1, 2015 at 6:19 PM
Dear David Thanks for your review of my little creepy dude write two, and your right there's nothing like a monstrous love from the parents of this undead couple for their little creepy dude OMG, love your Gorlizasurs, it is a truth of the future that may come to past if we don't change of ways, and become more eco friendly as a species, loved it's realism my friend, cheri
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