Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Free verse

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- Gorgeous Winter -

A bird feather in the winter breeze, soft and light
                      Composes music in white pleasurable tones
                                       an exclusive concert

                      I lose my dream in the cold room of the frost
                      Winter has glazed the last rose, fragile china
                  Merciless, without thoughts, defenseless in the cold
                   Snow crystals flash beautifully on the forest trees
                             it is magical and white everywhere
                             Decorated with a chubby bridal veil

                                A season clean and untouched
                      The Snow Queen's cold lips in romantic kiss
                               Soft snowflakes light as feathers
                                I will not allow my dream to die
                                    Hope returns to my heart
                                  It's time for a warm blanket,
                                  hot chocolate and adventures





                                               17.12.2020
                                       Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Jennifer Proxenos December 22, 2020 at 12:11 PM This is a definite win my friend, and poetry sis., so exotic and refined and beautiful - I have to make this a fave. Hugs and blessings, Jenny. Anne-Lise Andresen January 5, 2021 at 12:01 PM - Dear Jenny, many thanks for the lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

FJ Thomas December 22, 2020 at 8:54 AM A beautifully serene picture with a lovely warm ending. Hello søster ;°) Anne-Lise Andresen January 5, 2021 at 12:01 PM - Many thanks for the lovely comment, søster :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Beryl Edmonds December 21, 2020 at 3:18 PM A beautiful winter scene you paint in the mind of the reader Anne-lise, a lovely write. Best wishes~ Belle Anne-Lise Andresen January 5, 2021 at 12:00 PM - Many thanks for the lovely comment, Belle :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Carolyn Devonshire December 21, 2020 at 1:01 PM The "snow queen" is leaving her mark throughout my country, though Florida is only having cold weather. I love the metaphor of the feather, Sunshine. Keep your hopes and dreams alive! An excellent write, Hon. Best wishes for a win! Hugs, Carolyn Anne-Lise Andresen January 5, 2021 at 12:00 PM - Carolyn, many thanks for the lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper December 18, 2020 at 7:40 PM Great imagery and flow, Sunshine, beautiful poem. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve Anne-Lise Andresen January 5, 2021 at 12:00 PM - Many thanks for the lovely comment, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Alexis Y. December 18, 2020 at 7:18 AM Hi Anne-Lise, What a lovely dream filled with the spirit of Winter. Well done:-) Alexis Anne-Lise Andresen January 5, 2021 at 11:59 AM - Many thanks for the lovely comment, Alexis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Regina Mcintosh December 18, 2020 at 5:22 AM Love this, sweet lady. It vibrates W I N T E R! God bless you Anne-Lise Andresen January 5, 2021 at 11:59 AM - Many thanks for the lovely comment, Gina :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joanna Daniel December 17, 2020 at 10:42 PM Such a gorgeous dream of winter, Anne-lise, makes me long for snow:) Anne-Lise Andresen January 5, 2021 at 11:59 AM - Many thanks for the lovely comment, Jo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison December 17, 2020 at 3:46 PM I am lost within your dream sweet Anne-Lise this is so beautiful:-) hugs jan xx Anne-Lise Andresen January 5, 2021 at 11:59 AM - Many thanks for the lovely comment, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit December 17, 2020 at 2:22 PM Hot chocolate, warm blanket --sounds like a plan--enjoy the dream in winter land. Anne-Lise Andresen January 5, 2021 at 11:58 AM - Many thanks for the lovely comment, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Victor Buhagiar December 17, 2020 at 12:49 PM How can you let such a dream die? Lovely poem. ~~ Anne-Lise Andresen January 5, 2021 at 11:57 AM - Many thanks for visit and comment, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Newton Ranaweera December 17, 2020 at 12:49 PM A beautiful Snow Queen with warm wishes in cold weather!! Great imagery, Anne-Lise!! Wish you all the very best at the contest!! Anne-Lise Andresen January 5, 2021 at 11:58 AM - Many thanks for the lovely comment, Newton :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues December 17, 2020 at 11:23 AM Yes! Don’t let the dream die! I’ll take a pour of hot chocolate and adventures, please! Anne-Lise Andresen January 5, 2021 at 11:56 AM - Many thanks for the lovely comment, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)