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Gorgeous Eyes

A passionate soul, I've been possessed
But a recent image has left me quite obsessed
A dreamlike creature
With girlie-like features
Such gorgeous ears, well you know the rest

Copyright © Jack Ellison | Year Posted 2018

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Laura Breidenthal

March 23, 2018 at 2:29 PM

Very passionate limmy here (: Melikes! Always, Laura

March 23, 2018 at 4:28 PM

Aww, you are so sweet, Miss Laura!!! You know you're spoiling me, eh!!! Love it!!! Happy Jack XOX

March 23, 2018 at 2:07 PM

I had you down as a booby man , ears ? Well each to his own. Hey it wasn't a bunny girl was it ??

March 23, 2018 at 4:26 PM

LOVE BUNNY GIRLS!!! When I talk lovey stuff to them, they're all ears!!!

March 23, 2018 at 7:37 AM

Jack fell in love with a martian, told her he was the new Tarzan! Beat his hairy chest, to show he's the best. Then started singing like a mozartian

March 23, 2018 at 7:44 AM

I know you you love your classical music my friend..

March 23, 2018 at 7:41 AM

Hmmm... a Mozartian!!! You're really coming along, my son!!!

March 23, 2018 at 7:33 AM

I'm surprised your noticed the ears first lol..

March 23, 2018 at 7:39 AM

Well, I did notice they stick out a lot!!!

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