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unrhymed tercets 

Goodwill Haunting Hope

Twilight dawning eyes open 
as the heather bleat sings 
Into the coming night's dream 

Crickets ticking away in the long grass 
swaying thoughts drunken sailor sails 
time stands still for a moment peace 

Falsely promises defaced 
As meaningless flowers wither 
Where inside silence hides the guiding truth

Behind a mask consumed 
cowering away seeds 
Crocodile tears
 
Planted inside another's hurt 
falls guilty within the pain 
that kisses the burning fire 

Where everything is twisted ill to suit
Dressed up as something real 
where caring becomes the least important gesture 

It's here where the barriers fall shut 
Sharing stops when condemning bites with hate filled ideas 
Communication dies away were hidden agendas lay 

A bridge over troubled waters 
to cross this divide rocky desert winds howl
Storm in a teacup stirring 

That someone created friction 
for no good reason or another 
clouds descend heavy laden 

To feel good 
about themselves 
hurting another love
 
They become the stepping stone 
unto pain inflicted grief 
Reflections ripple casting shadows of doubt over
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Sathasivam Avatar
August 23, 2016 at 3:08 AM
Heartbreaking write. Well penned. Thanks for sharing it.
Fleming Avatar
August 22, 2016 at 2:09 PM
Very deep, Liam...And very powerful - Nicely expressed! My best regards! :) john P.s An obvious seven.
Petersen Potter Avatar
August 21, 2016 at 3:19 PM
Hi Liam! Wow!Wow!This is a very sad, profound n' heartbreaking poem you've written here my dearest friend Liam.So deeply sad n' heartfelt and I can feel your pain all the way in this piece too.All so very beautifully written in all its sadness and it makes me so very sad and it breaks my own heart in pieces just thinking of anyone hurting you in any way in the past, present or at any time Liam.Just praying here now more that you're really okay today and that no one has hurt you again in any way or form. Excellent piece!Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot that you're really okay in everything,Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you here in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too.Wishing you a very peaceful n' lovely weekend!In His light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
Andresen Avatar
August 21, 2016 at 2:19 PM
- Liam, a heart that bleeds - wounded deep into the soul - A heartbreaking poem, it's great written .... but, makes me thoughtful and sad - Hope all is well with you and your loved ones :) - I wish you a beautiful new week :) - and ........ Congratulations on our p.o.t.d. !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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