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Goodnight Under the Stars

outside, an incomprehensible moon hover behind wisp fingers gracious poise across vast sky boisterous songbird-swallows touch by the tease opalescent wisp of light prance around them muffle yawning lull wild succumb to slumber savor fresh breath beneath the vault of heaven 8/6/2021

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Date: 8/9/2021 2:59:00 AM
Congrats on your win in Brian's contest with this image-laden write, Eve. ~ Gershon
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Date: 8/7/2021 5:29:00 PM
This could also apply to faeries as well as stars "opalescent wisp of light prance around them" Great imagery, Eve
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Date: 8/6/2021 9:59:00 AM
The peace, serenity and beauty of nature's evening repose is well evoked in your wonderful poem, Eve. Blessings, Evelyn :)
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Date: 8/6/2021 12:53:00 AM
A charming poem that appeals to the pulchritudinous senses. Hugs
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Date: 8/5/2021 11:44:00 PM
Such lovely poetry., Eve. Splendiferous vocabulary. DIVINE ...... Imagery THE VAULT OF HEAVEN,,,,))) Panagiota
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