Goodnight Moon

Evening tiptoes away on slippered feet
Houses up and down the street are silhouettes
The faint sound of a train whistles through the air
            leaving a melancholy soliloquy resounding through the night

A table cleared of all traces of supper, is now set for breakfast
Doors are locked, and a screen has been put across the glowing embers
The two Labradors, in deep slumber, are curled in baskets by the back door

The house settles, like arthritic old bones
     and the momentum of a busy day winds itself down
Beyond the kitchen door, a garden is washed white by the moonlight
A mantel clock is ticking, and the refrigerator is humming with comfortable familiarity
The moon slowly makes a shadowy passage
          through the windows of each room
              as it puts the house to bed...

I quietly head up the stairs, reluctant to let these parting moments slip away
Crawling between the cool sheets, I snuggle my head on the softness of my good fortune
     In the long silent moments before I fall asleep
          my drowsy eyes turn to wander
            where window gazing finds the harvest moon
                  rifting in the darkness...
                     Against the moonlight, a magnolia branch is stenciled black and keen
                          Three stars are tangled in the topmost bough...

                               My eyes and I say goodnight to the moon....
                                      and thank you to the stars.....

                                            And today becomes tomorrow....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 10/4/2010 4:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Carrie in Deborah Guzzi's contest "Harvest Moon;P". Love, Carol
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Date: 10/1/2010 9:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your awesome win in the contest, Carrie!! Well worth it! Enjoy! Love, Audrey
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Date: 9/30/2010 8:07:00 AM
Big congrats on taking second place in the contest, Carrie. Well deserved! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/29/2010 9:18:00 PM
Wow! You really nailed it with this beautiful write, Carrie. Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C
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Date: 9/29/2010 9:05:00 PM
Congratulations on your big win Carrie. A beautiful write! Soupmail
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Date: 9/29/2010 8:11:00 PM
Awesome poem and awesome win, Carrie! Luv, Andrea Ps what a line: Three stars are tangled in the topmost bough!
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Date: 9/29/2010 7:28:00 PM
This is as beautiful still as I thought it was the first time i read it. A very worthy win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/29/2010 7:09:00 PM
Congratulations Carrie on your second place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 9/29/2010 5:49:00 PM
Congrats Carrie on your big win in the Harvest Moon contest.. another super write and win to enjoy tonight with luv..
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Date: 9/20/2010 3:16:00 PM
Wonderful use of creative imagery to set the tone for the end of day as you bid thank you "to the stars," Carrie. It is a surreal, dreamlike quality to it. Very nicely done! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/19/2010 11:34:00 AM
Enjoyed stopping by to say hi while reading your poetry, have yourself a wonderful day full of love & joy. Keep them smiles coming*luv ~SKAT
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Date: 9/19/2010 2:46:00 AM
What a lovely picturesque description you have made here of the moonlit night and the wonders which it creates to the beholders by intensely spreading the magic of moon and its alluring silver light. Beautiful write and a lovely entry for the contest. And many thank for your sweet and lovely comments on Rangoli, Hope you would also like How to make the Poetry on Floor I shall be posting shortly. Love and best wishes........Ravindra.....Carrie Richards
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Date: 9/18/2010 2:49:00 AM
And today becomes tomorrow. fine expression, Carrie. Good luck
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Date: 9/17/2010 9:09:00 PM
What a perfectly gorgeous, beautiful poem. Now this is what poetry is all about. It will surely be the top winner Carrie. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/17/2010 6:30:00 PM
Very creative and impreesive entry to the contest, Carrie
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