Maggie Huscroft Poet Rictameter

Goodnight Kiss

it's late
                              let's go to bed
                      before regrets take hold
               and we miss our moment to kiss
    good night my sweet, sleep well and dream of me
                 and I will see you when its light
                   just one more kiss goodnight
                           and just one more 
                                   it's late

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September 2, 2008 at 1:24 PM Thanks for allowing me to smile with this one. What a pleasant thought to close out the day. I really like the second line as we too often let our regrets seeping into making the most of each new day. Nice use of this challenging format. Keep on writing. Thank you also for your kind comments on my poem. Karen