Deb Wilson Poet Rhyme

Good-Bye,Loser

What if the stars fell from the skies
Would I then believe your lies?
Eat 'em like they were good for me
Dissolving in my mouth like candy

There's precious little you can say
No longer listening anyway
I'll cover my ears and start to chant
As for changing my mind,you can't

Stick it where the wind don't blow
You fooled me once but now I know
What you're made of and it's not good
So get out of my neighborhood!

I'll find my peace after you leave
Cos' I've got something up my sleeve
Just the thing to change my world
Again my freedom flag's unfurled




** luckily this is a rant against someone now out of my life..just venting!!

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Robert Pettit February 12, 2011 at 9:01 AM Deb, you have vented well with good descriptiveness and rhyming. Just change the first line in the first verse to: "Stick it where the wind doesn't blow".

Kendra Kautz January 25, 2011 at 11:11 PM Deb, this is awesome. i love it. i can't wait to read more. :) i had someone like that in my life too and (though it sounds bad) it makes me feel less angry with myself to know that i am not alone). thanks too for the comment on my poem :) luv kendra

Wilma Neels January 25, 2011 at 12:43 AM Deb, sometimes it's the best way to get it out of your system.. I tend to do it too.. Enjoyed this loads :) love Wilma

James Peranteau January 24, 2011 at 4:14 PM A fine way ta vent dear poet ! *smiles* Can ya imagine to have to paint a vent, lol ! Great write deb ! much love, james

Stacey Watts January 24, 2011 at 9:55 AM Sometimes it is nice to just open up and say what is on your mind. This was wonderful. Thanks for your kind words on my poem as well.

Billy Thekidster January 24, 2011 at 8:12 AM Good-bye what? How many times have I asked you not to call me by my last name? Nice rant and write. *TheKidsterWasHere*