Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Senryu

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04.02.2025

Anne-Lise Andresen
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A Valentine's Senryu 
Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin

7th place in the contest

 

- Goodbye Valentine -

                                            a fateful timing
                                 truth doubts - uncertain future ~
                                       I leave you tongue-tied

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Phyllis Babcock February 14, 2025 at 1:59 PM Love and separation and unsure of the future can take a person on an emotional journey. Happy Valentines my friend. love phyl

Duke Beaufort February 14, 2025 at 8:50 AM Anne-Lise, There's a lot here in a short poem. The end of love and separation could fill many novels. Take care and thanks for making me smile!!

Paula Goldsmith February 10, 2025 at 11:48 AM Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! What a "Goodbye Valentine" write and picture you have here. Have a great day today and on Valentine's Day............

Andrea Dietrich February 9, 2025 at 10:09 PM Aww this is so emotive. Good one, AnneLise

Tania Kitchin February 9, 2025 at 12:57 PM Anne-Lise, congratulations on your winning placement with your creative senryu.

Sara Kendrick February 5, 2025 at 5:01 PM I can feel the pain of the uncertain future. Thanks for sharing this on with us. Sara K

Kim Rodrigues February 5, 2025 at 10:50 AM I feel the angst…

CayCay Godwin February 5, 2025 at 10:07 AM ewwww - heavy, Senryu delivered hit. Good job! CayCay

Yann Rolland February 4, 2025 at 11:47 PM future is always, uncertain, i guess, and can change in a while, good luck in contest

Tom Cunningham February 4, 2025 at 10:59 PM Sadly it wasn't to be Anne-Lise, good luck in the contest. Greetings from Spain. Tom

Jay Narain February 4, 2025 at 10:24 AM You should not be brokenhearted. There is a joyful event lurking around the corner. Nice Valentine Senryu. Anne-Lise Andresen February 4, 2025 at 1:15 PM - Only a different Valentine poem, Jay :) - hugs

Silent One February 4, 2025 at 8:58 AM A heart breaking one.. Especially when the truth is spoken.. Best of luck in the contest..

Lin Lane February 4, 2025 at 7:23 AM You've made good use of the sidewalk crack to promote your broken-hearted Valentine Senryu. Well done, Anne-Lise!

Oliver Mckeithan February 4, 2025 at 4:47 AM Very nice Senryu to a good picture. Well done and a good entry for the contest.