Goodbye Note

I awaken to a hastily written note and an empty house...
The inevitable end was here...
Nothing could have prepared me for this...
Everything is so clouded, and so clear...
She snatched up my heart while I was sleeping,
and took it with her...
The only reason I know it's gone, is I can 
no longer feel the murmur...
There was a whirlwind of her exit like a traveling storm...
My dreams lay in ruin, all tattered and torn...
Was this my fault or was it some saboteur?
I stand in the debris in a hazy blur...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Palmer Avatar
August 14, 2012 at 6:23 AM
brush off,gather your feelings,if needs be cry a little it helps to let the pain out,sad but you will survive,great write Darrell
Andresen Avatar
August 13, 2012 at 11:53 AM
So sad....broken heart hurts Darrell - well written through tears. - Take care - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Williams Avatar
August 13, 2012 at 11:41 AM
Darrell an excellent write of a broken heart, hope it's fiction...David
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