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Goodbye Note

I awaken to a hastily written note and an empty house... The inevitable end was here... Nothing could have prepared me for this... Everything is so clouded, and so clear... She snatched up my heart while I was sleeping, and took it with her... The only reason I know it's gone, is I can no longer feel the murmur... There was a whirlwind of her exit like a traveling storm... My dreams lay in ruin, all tattered and torn... Was this my fault or was it some saboteur? I stand in the debris in a hazy blur...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/14/2012 6:23:00 AM
brush off,gather your feelings,if needs be cry a little it helps to let the pain out,sad but you will survive,great write Darrell
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Date: 8/13/2012 11:53:00 AM
So sad....broken heart hurts Darrell - well written through tears. - Take care - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/13/2012 11:41:00 AM
Darrell an excellent write of a broken heart, hope it's fiction...David
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