Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Free verse

- Goodbye My Friend -

- I sent you a warm summer smile with the sun
                         - But you did not receive

                         - I sent you sweet little kisses with the wind
                         - But they did not reach to you

                         - I sent you warm thoughts on a dusty country road
                         - But the thoughts was gone by the dust

                         - I sent you my tears with the waves
                         - But you could not see them

                         - I sent you my weeping heart
                         - But you did not know

                         - I sent you a hundred deep red roses
                         - But you had traveled your own way





20.07.2013
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Diana Freiwald September 17, 2013 at 2:10 PM Nice :) Anne-Lise Andresen September 18, 2013 at 8:50 AM - Highly appreciate your visit and comments - Thank you, Diana ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jessica Soler August 23, 2013 at 10:48 AM "Wow! this is so lovely and so touching...i love this poem and the way you have penned it down so perfectly...love jessica" Anne-Lise Andresen August 23, 2013 at 11:08 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and your comments, Jessica. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Aiden Asoll August 21, 2013 at 3:34 PM Hey, I read through a quick few of your poems and this one really stands out to me as well written, clearly got a lot of meaning in it too Anne-Lise Andresen August 22, 2013 at 1:35 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and your comments, Aiden. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Linda Jackson August 19, 2013 at 2:03 PM Hello, A sweet poem tinged with sadness. Well written. Kind wishes Linda x Anne-Lise Andresen August 19, 2013 at 2:27 PM - Thank you for taking time to read my poem, Nice With a comments from you Linda. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Saanvi Dua August 13, 2013 at 1:33 PM oh ! one day , he will truly receive the love ! enjoyed stopping by ! love , Saanvi :p Anne-Lise Andresen August 13, 2013 at 2:06 PM - Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Saanvi. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Carol Eastman August 13, 2013 at 11:56 AM I loved how this one was written... and the thoughts... Anne-Lise Andresen August 13, 2013 at 12:08 PM - Thanks for visiting and your kind comments Carol, much appreciated feedback on my poems. - Oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Patrick Farley Iv August 5, 2013 at 5:25 PM Heart warming write. I absolutely loved the compassion felt in this poem -Patrick Farley IV Anne-Lise Andresen August 6, 2013 at 1:51 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and your comments, Patrick.- oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Sue-Ellen Newman August 3, 2013 at 8:05 AM Saying good by to. Friend is very hard, we do suffer a separation grief, good friends are hard to find, when we find a true friend stick like glue, great write, blessings sueellen Anne-Lise Andresen August 3, 2013 at 12:11 PM - Thanks for the nice visit and your comments, Sue-Ellen. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Jacob Owusu Sarfo August 2, 2013 at 1:32 PM nice one, I like the passion Anne-Lise Andresen August 2, 2013 at 1:33 PM - Thanks for the nice visit and your comments, Richard. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Anne-Lise Andresen August 2, 2013 at 1:33 PM - Thanks for the nice visit and your comments, Jacob. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Richard D Seal August 2, 2013 at 1:20 PM Losing a friend is always sad Anne Lise but never give up hope, very lovely write. Take care, Richard Anne-Lise Andresen August 2, 2013 at 1:34 PM - Thanks for the nice visit and your comments, Richard. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Dipika Syngai August 1, 2013 at 6:00 AM Sad...missing someone is not the best feeling in the world :( Wonderfully written words! Keep it up! xoxo Dipika Anne-Lise Andresen August 1, 2013 at 1:28 PM - Thanks for the nice visit and your comments, Dipika. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Kathryn Collins July 28, 2013 at 7:33 AM Anne Lise My gosh. So sad your poem in such simplicity. love, Kathy Anne-Lise Andresen July 30, 2013 at 9:35 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and your comments, Kathryn. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Jon Arno July 25, 2013 at 5:38 PM Powerful words testifying of two hearts that just could not connect. Best regards Jon Anne-Lise Andresen July 26, 2013 at 2:34 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and your comments, Jon. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Betty Bateson July 25, 2013 at 12:50 PM So sad and yet so beautiful. Lovely. Betty Anne-Lise Andresen July 25, 2013 at 1:00 PM - Thanks for your comments and your visit, Betty. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Shadow Hamilton July 25, 2013 at 11:19 AM wow so poignant and lovely so glad i read this today ty Shadow x smiles(7) Anne-Lise Andresen July 25, 2013 at 11:46 AM - Thanks for your visit and comment Shadow, much appreciated! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Sean L Sanders July 25, 2013 at 10:26 AM Wow!!!!!!!! This is very touching very good poem poet Anne-Lise Andresen July 25, 2013 at 11:46 AM - Thanks for your visit and comment Sean, much appreciated! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Ronny Madonsela July 25, 2013 at 5:10 AM Touching, often than not , i feel that way sometimes. way to sum it up Anne. What a gem of a write. *smiles* Ron Anne-Lise Andresen July 25, 2013 at 5:11 AM - Thanks for your visit and comment Ronny, much appreciated! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Don Johnson July 25, 2013 at 4:49 AM keep trying babe it will happen xox Anne-Lise Andresen July 25, 2013 at 4:50 AM - Thanks for your visit and comment Don, much appreciated! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Cherie Thomas July 24, 2013 at 9:33 PM Very deeply touching!!!! So many can relate to these words,,,, thankyou4sharing Anne...blessingsxx cherie Anne-Lise Andresen July 25, 2013 at 2:19 AM - Thank you for your visit and comments Cherie - welcome back whenever you want it! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock July 24, 2013 at 8:33 PM This is so beautiful that it touches the heart. We can only do so much before we let friends go. We can reach but if they do not reach back all we can do is say we tried. Wonderful poem Anne Lise. love phyl Anne-Lise Andresen July 25, 2013 at 2:18 AM - Thank you for your visit and comments Phyllis - welcome back whenever you want it! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Paul Martinez July 24, 2013 at 3:21 PM Im a young man with alot of heart..ive lost a few friends and this definitely touches me..very beautiful poem. Anne-Lise Andresen July 24, 2013 at 3:28 PM - Thanks for your visit and comment Paul, much appreciated! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :))))

Dinda Minardi July 24, 2013 at 7:42 AM How sad!!! I hope this doesnt come from the real event, Anne Lise Anne-Lise Andresen July 24, 2013 at 8:13 AM - Thanks for your visit and comment Dinda, much appreciated! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Dan Kearley July 24, 2013 at 12:21 AM Oh this poem saddens me so....It is hard to even wish you a Happy Birthday on it! Sorry I haven't been around in a while to read your writes. Been really busy trying to catch up with everything going on in life. But I will catch up eventually. Happy Birthday my f.e.f I hope it was beautiful. :o) Anne-Lise Andresen July 24, 2013 at 3:41 AM - Do not be sad ... it is "just" a poem ... Thanks for the congratulations on my B-day, dear friend Dan. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun July 23, 2013 at 4:23 PM Good morning my dearest friend Anne Lise! And Happy, happy birthday!!! I was trying to stop by last night to post a poem for you but we'd thunder storm here so, I thought of waking up early and posting it now. I hope you'll go and read it and i hope, you'll like it as well. About your poem, it's beautifully sad and great! I hope it's only a poem. Again, have a happy happy birthday! Big big hugs to you & wish you all the best. Love lots, Leonora Anne-Lise Andresen July 24, 2013 at 3:38 AM - Dear sweet, kind, thoughtful, loving and good friend Leonora! - You have a heart that "pumps" out gold!! - I LOVE IT!! - I thank you with all my heart, the poem I'll always take care of. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Lucilla Carrillo July 23, 2013 at 12:30 PM This is very nice, but sad. It is always sad when you lose a friend, or when they leave. Hope it's just a poem.. Lucilla Anne-Lise Andresen July 23, 2013 at 12:32 PM ...."just a poem", Lucilla. - Thanks for your visit and comment , much appreciated! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

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