Goodbye Moon Hello Sunshine

Adoring the night skies, tried to reach the moon
Within my universe I spread my thoughts
The inspiration floating through your beautiful noon

My days may be soon gone like a fading fogs 
But not for my night which always lingered by your magical motion
Within my universe I spread my thoughts

The colors of those verses are the rainbow of your creation
Even night might lullaby you too fast by its tender grace
But not for my night which always lingered  by your magical motion

Day is your strength which I borrowed to enlighten my moon in  phrase
Your day may be lingered for greeting my beautiful night
Even night might lullaby you too fast by its tender grace

You may say  bye to your sunshine and hello to my moonlight
Night now begin to caress through your sweet wonderful dream
Your day may be lingered for greeting my beautiful night

Day now is opening my window towards to the memory of your sweet sunbeam
Night now begin to caress through your sweet wonderful dream
Adoring the night skies, tried to reach the moon
The inspiration floating through your beautiful noon

January 11, 2013
Dedicated to sweet Richard Lamoureux who shines my moon through his warmth reflection and wishing him a gorgeous day for his beautiful sunshines

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 1/13/2013 3:27:00 AM
Lovely moonlight and lovely sunshine -> just like you! - Have a nice sunny Sunday Yanny. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 1/13/2013 4:44:00 AM
Have a sunny sunday too for you Anne, you are really my great sunshine and moonlight :D
Date: 1/11/2013 7:07:00 PM
Beautiful dedication !! Penned with much heart and much talent !! I think your moon shines through with your words.....
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 1/11/2013 8:38:00 PM
Thank you Debra, your comment also lovely in my page, it reflect the warm sunshine too :) - hug, yanny
Date: 1/11/2013 5:38:00 PM
Wow, definately moving to my favorites, I am touched an honored by your words. Thank you! I am amazed at how well you have adapted to this style. It suits you well.
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 1/11/2013 8:36:00 PM
Thank you Rick, yours inspired me alot in writing this poem, :D cannot make it without the poem by you :D - have a wonderful night Rick, and have a good rest :D
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