Goodbye, Lee

Lee and I work for the same company. I've been here for ten years; Lee, for only a year. Her spot has been occupied by nine other young women in the past decade. They just left--not bothering to resign or clean out their desks--
simply vanishing, it seems, into thin air! They're now classified as "missing."
I hear about their cases on the news and just shake my head.

Through the years, I have made concentrated efforts to get close to the
young ladies who have worked in the position Lee now fills--and have 
tried just as mightily to charm Lee. All have apparently been oblivious to 
me, failing to realize what a catch I am! Oh, well, there will be others after Lee. She really doesn't deserve me anyway. None of them did--those vapid, unambitious creatures doing their mundane little duties.  It's 5:25, almost 
time to leave work. Lee walks to work and jogs home, after changing her shoes. I know exactly where she lives.

Lee isn't aware that I already know a great deal about her type--the barely-
average young woman destined for obscurity by her nondescript personality, incapable of fathoming that a heart can be as hard and black as ebony, unaware that she's about to be dangled over an opaque pit into which she 
will be plunged, too dense to know that some nice-looking young guys hide behind a shiny veneer and watch--just watch--till the time is right to take
revenge on those who stupidly rejected their obvious charms. This  woman, 
my tenth, will deserve her crimson death.

The others never saw me coming, Lee. You won't either!


Date: November 7, 2017

Contest Title: Stalker

Sponsor: Silent One
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Haight Avatar
November 18, 2017 at 5:48 PM
A great poem, chilling poem, Janice. Congratulations on your nice placement in the contest! Hugs, Sandra
Canerdy Avatar
November 18, 2017 at 8:35 PM
Thanks so much, Sandra! Janice
Barden Avatar
November 18, 2017 at 5:00 AM
Sincere congrats on your well-deserved win, Janice ... blessings! :-)
Canerdy Avatar
November 18, 2017 at 8:45 AM
Thank you, Greg! Janice
One Avatar
November 17, 2017 at 2:15 PM
Great storytelling Janice.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest
Canerdy Avatar
November 17, 2017 at 2:29 PM
Thanks, S.O., and thanks for sponsoring. Janice
Turner Avatar
June 1, 2017 at 6:03 PM
Reads as if you may have given the idea some thought, Mrs Janice:) Lol A real slasher! I'll have to remember this in case we ever go for a walk:)
Canerdy Avatar
June 1, 2017 at 6:18 PM
This message has me laughing, Daniel! When I take walks I always leave ALL my weapons at home. LOL! Luloo asked for something DARK. I'm trying not to disappoint. Thanks for the comment. Janice
Toluwalope Gideon Avatar
June 1, 2017 at 4:58 PM
Very sad indeed!
Canerdy Avatar
June 1, 2017 at 5:03 PM
Yes, it is sad. I made this up, but there are some very evil people in the world! Thanks so much for your comment, Adeniji! Janice
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