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Goodbye Heart

My thoughts were your persuasions My actions copied your thoughts In crowded sidewalks of this city Giving ways to others I gave away my way Even then You made me say - I am sorry You have numbed my mind With your wild beats And my head rolled down the drain Like a crumpled page of poetry Bidding farewell to you Hurts me for sure Such as absence's silent sting Even when I prepare your burial Finally I'm left with a wish To walk for myself For once Without you and In this wispy heartlessness I become wiser In the ways of the world

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 10/29/2018 11:02:00 AM
Hello Ibohal, Yes good bye heart. This shows that you have a strong heart. You will get over this pain sooner or later. have a nice day my friend.
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Ibohal Kshetrimayum
Date: 10/29/2018 12:00:00 PM
Thank you, Darlene. I'll be ok. God bless.
Date: 10/28/2018 5:42:00 PM
This is wisdom, Man! You have to be yourself. Nice poem, reflects a strong soul.
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Ibohal Kshetrimayum
Date: 10/28/2018 10:17:00 PM
Hi, thank you. I too enjoy your poems. You know, Darwish is one of my favorites, and your poems remind me of his. God bless.

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