Goodbye Footle

goodbye
I sigh

tears flow
I know

will miss
the bliss

the fun
now gone

goodbye
I cry


28 August 2021
FOOTLE FINALE Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Brian Strand
1st place
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Gauthier Avatar
December 14, 2022 at 7:55 AM
well penned ~
George Avatar
May 15, 2022 at 2:00 AM
Each time I read your footle, I feel that you are an unrivaled master in that poetic form
Ashley Avatar
August 31, 2021 at 6:52 PM
Dear JCB, your heartfelt footle is amazing and moving. A beautiful tribute to Brian, a wonderful poet and contest sponsor. Congratulations for your excellent win in Brian's contest. Your golden heart shines, my sweet friend. Warmest wishes and hugs.. ~Susan
Allison Avatar
August 30, 2021 at 5:05 PM
wonderful tribute, i didnt even know the contest was on am sad on so many levels as i loved the footle form, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Roper Avatar
August 28, 2021 at 7:01 PM
Great tribute for Brian , JCB, congratulations in your win in his Footle contest. Hugs Eve
Dietrich Avatar
August 28, 2021 at 9:54 AM
Oh, it's for Brian?? I did not even realize he said it was his last contest until someone told me. I thought FINALE was just to mean end of footles!! BIG congrats, JCB
Strand Avatar
August 28, 2021 at 9:52 AM
Thank you JCB for this tribute
Jayasankar Avatar
August 28, 2021 at 8:56 AM
So beautifully penned footle dear JCB... I missed writing for this... sigh... Hugs... ~ Ani
Ray Choudhury Avatar
August 28, 2021 at 8:05 AM
Congratulations, JCB. A very sweet Footle for Brian’s Finale!
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