Goodbye Beloved

One last time may I steal
A kiss from the only mouth 
that ever knew how to
enslave and awake every
Ounce of my being..
quivering lips dampened
by the salts of sorrow
Hoping that moment
To linger an eternity
as if with quiet eyes
And mournful pleas could
Ever say goodbye
to the one true love of
my life....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Mcdaid Avatar
September 9, 2013 at 12:21 PM
VERY BEAUTIFUL IN DEPTH FEELINGS PENNED WITHIN
Mc Mills-Cooper Avatar
September 5, 2013 at 5:31 PM
This is a pretty nice poem, "quivering lips dampened by the salts of sorrow" -that's an amazing line...Great Job here! MC
Carroll Avatar
August 25, 2013 at 7:36 AM
Hi Madelin, Heartfelt write with forlorn emotion here... regards, Ken
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