Goodbye Again

When our spirits split my soul was but yet again out on a vine
What happens in those late night tears should be a crime
Thats what it is, an outlawed time
The shortest version of what we had is sublimed
I can't deny what is, I felt like dying
A helpful version of release right here online
Therapy to lift me out out of another dime
That hurts there all good left here to shine
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Van Breda Avatar
August 15, 2013 at 7:57 AM
Emotional piece-- obviously penned with truth and feeling making it real.
Courtney Avatar
August 15, 2013 at 3:45 PM
truth hurts sometimes
Tacito Avatar
August 14, 2013 at 6:49 PM
So much for that whole "if you set them free and they return" quote, eh? Needless to say, that happened to myself & a friend a long while ago. It was a pity, really. This hit home for me. I'm sure the heart is ready to say "Hi, again" for something better. Other than a few typos "laye", "aother", this was a very deep writing. Very well done! Great to see a new one from you!
Courtney Avatar
August 15, 2013 at 3:46 PM
love comes and it goes hope the best for you corrected typos thanks for reading and for rating
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