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Goodbye Again

When our spirits split my soul was but yet again out on a vine What happens in those late night tears should be a crime Thats what it is, an outlawed time The shortest version of what we had is sublimed I can't deny what is, I felt like dying A helpful version of release right here online Therapy to lift me out out of another dime That hurts there all good left here to shine

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Kim Van Breda

Date: 8/15/2013 7:57:00 AM

Emotional piece-- obviously penned with truth and feeling making it real.

Courtney Courtney
Date: 8/15/2013 3:45:00 PM

truth hurts sometimes

Poet Tacito

Date: 8/14/2013 6:49:00 PM

So much for that whole "if you set them free and they return" quote, eh? Needless to say, that happened to myself & a friend a long while ago. It was a pity, really. This hit home for me. I'm sure the heart is ready to say "Hi, again" for something better. Other than a few typos "laye", "aother", this was a very deep writing. Very well done! Great to see a new one from you!

Courtney Courtney
Date: 8/15/2013 3:46:00 PM

love comes and it goes hope the best for you corrected typos thanks for reading and for rating