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Goodbye

I have a disease
and it’s killing me,
I don’t put up guards,
too open for my own good.
I say what I feel
and I feel too much,
this Earth school is too dense.
My heart’s too big,
it makes no sense.
It seems I love Earth
but it doesn’t love me.
I’m not fearless,
not invincible
but I am invisible.
So, goodbye, dear friends,
goodbye,
I’m going back to the sky.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 2/26/2018 7:23:00 AM
This poem is a wow. I am making it a favorite.
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Phil Capitano
Date: 2/27/2018 4:22:00 AM
Thank you Caren, so kind of you.
Date: 12/20/2017 7:20:00 AM
Saw you were online so you're still earthbound for now. How you be big Phil?
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Date: 12/6/2017 11:45:00 PM
We hope u don't really go. For u n your talent will be missed. As long as your words are visible so r u poet. Thumbs up for this sad appealing poem. thumbs up. Pls do review my poem too, might cheer u up.
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Date: 11/26/2017 6:47:00 AM
This sad but a good write. Hope you're well dear Phil. Hugs and smiles :)
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Date: 11/22/2017 10:32:00 PM
Great tragic poem Phill, well done
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Date: 11/1/2017 6:02:00 PM
Phil please do not leave. I hope also that it is only a poem,do not leave the Soup.Yes you are appreciated. This is a very sad poem. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 9/28/2017 5:25:00 PM
Such a sad write Phil, hopefully it's only a poem, I hope this doesn't mean you're leaving the soup too? You are a singular voice here, and are truly appreciated!
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Date: 9/27/2017 3:26:00 PM
A sad , well expressed poem. I hope you are not leaving phil.
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