Phil Capitano Poet Narrative

Goodbye

I have a disease
and it’s killing me,
I don’t put up guards,
too open for my own good.
I say what I feel
and I feel too much,
this Earth school is too dense.
My heart’s too big,
it makes no sense.
It seems I love Earth
but it doesn’t love me.
I’m not fearless,
not invincible
but I am invisible.
So, goodbye, dear friends,
goodbye,
I’m going back to the sky.

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Caren Krutsinger February 26, 2018 at 7:23 AM This poem is a wow. I am making it a favorite. Phil Capitano February 27, 2018 at 4:22 AM Thank you Caren, so kind of you.

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri December 6, 2017 at 11:45 PM We hope u don't really go. For u n your talent will be missed. As long as your words are visible so r u poet. Thumbs up for this sad appealing poem. thumbs up. Pls do review my poem too, might cheer u up.

Akkina Downing November 26, 2017 at 6:47 AM This sad but a good write. Hope you're well dear Phil. Hugs and smiles :)

Isaac T Matlala November 22, 2017 at 10:32 PM Great tragic poem Phill, well done

Darlene De Beaulieu November 1, 2017 at 6:02 PM Phil please do not leave. I hope also that it is only a poem,do not leave the Soup.Yes you are appreciated. This is a very sad poem. Have a nice evening my friend.

John Hamilton September 28, 2017 at 5:25 PM Such a sad write Phil, hopefully it's only a poem, I hope this doesn't mean you're leaving the soup too? You are a singular voice here, and are truly appreciated!

Heidi Sands September 27, 2017 at 3:26 PM A sad , well expressed poem. I hope you are not leaving phil.