Goodbye

Ticking lke a time bomb 
Nothing is right 
Never will be 
For the ones I love 
And the ones I hate 
Take this time 
Do not hesitate 
For I will be gone 
Sooner then you think 
My life will only be a memory 
Nothing more
Nothing less
I wish you farewell 
Now I lay me down to rest 
With this knife into my chest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Paynter Avatar
June 29, 2013 at 10:33 PM
thank you
Orozco Avatar
June 29, 2013 at 10:10 PM
Powerful piece! Intense well written!! :)
Maharaj Avatar
May 13, 2013 at 3:53 AM
Powerful indeed...
A   Avatar
May 8, 2013 at 4:16 PM
Hi Cara, for this one I have for this one I hate. powerful thoughts. Your poem is dark and should be the final message we should endorse on our graves... I love the poem...xox~ Linda
Paynter Avatar
June 29, 2013 at 10:34 PM
I have a new poem finally!!!
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