Goodbye

blinking back tears

   that threaten to flow

       my eyes are burning

this will be our last goodbye

    angels will carry you home
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Ajmal Avatar
June 2, 2017 at 9:28 AM
A very beautiful poem, it s so sad and heart touching, I really enjoyed it however i m new on this site and would really appreciate if you could find time to read my poems and give your honest reviews about them
Dietrich Avatar
March 29, 2013 at 5:06 PM
I think I may have seen this one at the tanka FB page. It's very touching.
Mannan Avatar
March 20, 2013 at 3:06 AM
Beautiful and so sad.
Wilson Avatar
March 20, 2013 at 2:34 AM
so very sad but really beautiful Francine..love,Deb
Andresen Avatar
March 20, 2013 at 12:48 AM
- So sad Francine, but a nice way to say goodbye. - Have a beautiful day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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