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Goodbye

I loved you, you lied. I gave you my all, you took it and laughed. I left you and you cried. I told you, there was never "us" there was only an "I".

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/1/2012 7:38:00 AM
Sweet and sad poem.....but I like it.Love is not easy my friend. Happy new year to you!OXOX hugs from Anne-Lise
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A. Rosario
Date: 1/1/2012 2:47:00 PM
thank you, Happy New year to you as well
Date: 1/1/2012 5:54:00 AM
Wow, a great write. I am sad to read that you were hurt by someone whom you loved. Been there many, many years ago my sweet. You did right to leave, Jancarl
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A. Rosario
Date: 1/1/2012 2:48:00 PM
Thanks for your feedback

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