Goodbye

I loved you, you lied.
I gave you my all, you took it 
and laughed.
I left you and you cried.
I told you, there was never 
"us" there was only an "I".
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Andresen Avatar
January 1, 2012 at 7:38 AM
Sweet and sad poem.....but I like it.Love is not easy my friend. Happy new year to you!OXOX hugs from Anne-Lise
Rosario Avatar
January 1, 2012 at 2:47 PM
thank you, Happy New year to you as well
Campi Avatar
January 1, 2012 at 5:54 AM
Wow, a great write. I am sad to read that you were hurt by someone whom you loved. Been there many, many years ago my sweet. You did right to leave, Jancarl
Rosario Avatar
January 1, 2012 at 2:48 PM
Thanks for your feedback
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