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Goodbye 2010

Boy you started off rough I just knew getting through would be tough There were more highs than lows I paid the price for wrongs I chose Although the road was sometimes bumpy Something always made me smile when I was grumpy For a whole year I stood on my own Focus and drive was my chosen zone Persevered through it all Was lifted up each time I’d fall I made plans and dictated commands How they came to be… even I don’t fully understand With each new obstacle or battle I faced Wisdom and courage I embraced I’m reminded of those who were by my side Those who gave me comfort as I cried Those who gave me inspiration When my world was filled with endless frustration Those who reached out to lend a hand When my life had severe demands As this year comes to an end I reflect on mistakes and vow to make amends I’m thankful for the challenges both good and bad Grateful for the struggles I’ve had They all define me and make me whole Push me closer to attaining my goals This year was better than the last Next year I’m sure will be a blast! Lay **For Royal Trevino Happy Year! Contest *4th place win

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Date: 1/13/2011 11:59:00 AM
Congratulations Lay on your win in Royal Trevino's contest "New Year". Love, Carol
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Date: 1/10/2011 6:17:00 PM
wow! Lay,, Congratulations in the contest. enjoyed,..p.d.
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Date: 1/10/2011 7:50:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of Royal, Walayee
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Date: 1/9/2011 11:01:00 AM
If we learn form our mistakes and errors the years can't help but be better. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/9/2011 10:03:00 AM
Congrats Lay on your wonderful win in Royal's contest with this magnificent entry my friend.. enjoy your top ten victory with luv luv luv..
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Date: 12/26/2010 7:57:00 AM
wading through your poem that sparkles with rich imagery and theme, lay.. you have such talent and great flourishing pen! warmest, nette
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Date: 12/24/2010 6:56:00 PM
hey this is a great poem Lay! I love it all. Great attitude and upbeat with a reality kick. Merry Christmas to you
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Date: 12/24/2010 7:17:00 AM
This depicts the trials and triumphs very wonderfully. Positive energy flows from the words. Thanks so much for sharing. Have a safe blessed Christmas & A Joyous New Year! ~Mary~
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Date: 12/23/2010 6:09:00 PM
Glad that you had a good and year and are so optimistic for the coming one..I enjoyed reading your work...I am glad that I chose this one to read this eve..Your presence at my work lifted my spirits..Sara
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Date: 12/23/2010 9:54:00 AM
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Date: 12/23/2010 9:10:00 AM
Super write Lay.. and a perfect entry for the new contest luv... wishing u the most awesome 2011 ... appreciate your lovely comments on our Italian traditions luv.. happy holidays again...
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Date: 12/23/2010 7:26:00 AM
I like the postitive energy in this write on New Year resolutions, Lay. MErry Xmas to you. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 12/23/2010 5:40:00 AM
You have penned inspiring postive resolutions for the coming year, Walayee
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Date: 12/22/2010 11:10:00 PM
I love your optimism faith Lay! You're strong and you have all you need witin you to accomplish whatever you want! Merry Christmas and a very happy New Year! Peace, joy and happiness, always, Audrey
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Date: 12/22/2010 9:30:00 PM
Walayee, a nice reflective write on this year, wishful that 2011 will really be a blast for you.. Blessings and love Wilma
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Date: 12/22/2010 9:30:00 PM
That's the spirit, Lay. A joyful and uplifting write. Best wishes in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/22/2010 9:28:00 PM
Smile ~ "Yes," for some reason Deep Inside, I too Believe that, next year shall hold something Very Beautiful for "Life; 'All of Life' Within, 'Creations Tides'" ~ Smile, well, at least, that's how I feel and I suppose, perhaps, somewhat as "Your Lovely Self" ~ "Very Bright & Inspirational Portrait of A Poe" ~ "My Love & Warmth to 'You & Yours,' Always," John! ~ Smile, "Happy Holidays;" Bye!:) ~
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Date: 12/22/2010 9:16:00 PM
I love the optimism in this piece..very good! take care~Deb
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Date: 12/22/2010 6:40:00 PM
I think my year will end up rough,, trying to make it out alive,,, yes hopefully my next year will be a blast,..p.d.
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Date: 12/22/2010 6:36:00 PM
You have made a beautiful sketch of feelings and emotions. Reading your Poem was joy. Beautiful write Whitlock and my good wishes for a Merry Christmas and New Year 2011 and thanks for your comments on my featured Poem. Love and best wishes...Ravindra....W Whitlock
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