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Goodby Morning Person

GOODBYE MORNING PERSON

Sit up
Stretch
Yawn
Head quite empty
Woozy
No remembered dreams
Before anything else    COFFEE!
It’s the cats and me
Squeaky teeth
Sponge bath    or shower
Shave
Nothing profound 
Just life
Just plain naked
On the avenue    (back of my mind) wheels haven’t started
                                                                        their daily spin
The weather channel    (with its mindless music)
A neighborhood feel – what goes on next door    in the
                                                                                WORLD!
Yes!    now it begins
It’s a neighborhood thing
Cannot be helped – it starts
An up-and-down-the-block thing
Mentally I’m out the door
There are streets    avenues    stores    a mall
Something is alive out there
The conviction    strangely    eases
With the first taste I start to function
And function is what it’s all about
                                                ask any newscaster
Realizing this “function”    it eases
There is some ridiculous wholeness    some sanity
The night?    the dream?  unreal!
By noon all is GO!
Another drag-ass day
I am this other person    this programmed stiff
The morning person is distant
I do not even want to recall that jelly
Some formula has taken hold
                                 has been in the veins all along
Yes!    the VEINS!
There are numbers flowing
Problems with no answers
Problems kicked aside
The “ME” has taken over
Unashamed
Fully astrut
Going down the same uniform avenues
Feeling the same guilt    same lust
                           Same unstoppable drive
Goodbye morning person

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/2/2010 3:20:00 AM
Hi Dave & Super belated Happy Birthday btw :) Just have to love this write of yours, very witty--I am such a night owl as well it's not funny sometimes ;) but ok, I love mornings, I love mornings... ;)
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Date: 8/1/2010 8:37:00 PM
OH! DAVER~ u sure R. What I would WAke up to. A Smiley moon. GOT some Coffee~SKAT
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Date: 7/30/2010 4:39:00 AM
you are always very clever Daver, i enjoyed the way you ended your poem,, smiles and a chuckle... What a path to enjoy for such a man...well maybe not that enjoyable,,lol,,what about that sponge bath..sounds like a classic morning. Oh what a stiff they can be,,oi oi I asume I am no man to know,,Enjoyed daver,..p.d.
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Date: 7/28/2010 6:54:00 PM
Usually morning person refers to someone who loves the mornings. YOU, my friend, sound like me, a night owl, who only gets better and better as the day goes on. VERY nice! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 7/28/2010 4:10:00 PM
Heh heh, that last verse kinda kicked me in the butt! it's the end of the day now but You made me feel like starting it again, Daver! Feel like goin out there ...kickin butt and takin names but forgot how to write! Really enjoyed how you put this one together Daver...and hey..thanks for your great comment. I appreciate it as always my friend.
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Date: 7/28/2010 7:18:00 AM
This Narrative is quite the poetic write...I enjoyed it tremendously ! Awesome ! james
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Date: 7/27/2010 1:56:00 PM
Interesting thoughts that you have penned in this one..Have you been taking Lunester? Sara
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Date: 7/26/2010 3:45:00 PM
What a journey ! Dave. I know th feeling all-to-well. Love, Lainie
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