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Good Times

love lust passion all the same mind body soul can be separate tears scrapes bruises are all painful sick, faint torn, crushed washed up like a lush tired, restless lost, confused caught up in a mess friends family God are all present joy luck happiness are good wishes smile, laugh sing, dance let yourself be free!

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James Fraser

Date: 1/10/2010 6:58:00 AM

Very interesting poetry Amanda, thank you for sharing >> James

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/10/2010 3:36:00 AM

Interesting comparisons and contrast in this short write. Keep the thought provoking writes flowing. Sara

Helen J Radford

Date: 1/10/2010 1:51:00 AM

Interesting composition; it reflects the 'dis-jointedness' of life somehow. The words you have chosen to group together are probably reflections of how you are feeling maybe? 'mind, body, soul, can be separate' yet you have grouped them together..... or maybe I'm just reading to much into it! Must be feeling philosophical. Welll done anyway - I enjoyed it! Helen x