Ann Gilmour Poet Senryu

Good Over Evil

stabbed and left for dead
people looked the other way...
angel saved his soul

SECOND PLACE
30th May 2019
Contest: Writing Challenge 5, May 2019, Senryu
Sponsor: Dear Heart 

Syllable Counter 5 7 5

Contest Strand Pick 10
Sponsor Brian Strand
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Andrea Dietrich June 10, 2019 at 3:51 PM back with my congratulations, Ann. Ann Gilmour June 11, 2019 at 12:04 AM Many thanks Andrea for your welcome congrats, with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Constance La France June 10, 2019 at 11:13 AM Ann congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful Senryu ~ Ann Gilmour June 10, 2019 at 11:22 AM Bless you Constance and thank you so much for my win and for your amazing contests! With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Andrea Dietrich June 4, 2019 at 6:31 PM I'm glad you had him be saved! Not enough good samaritans in the world any more. Ann Gilmour June 5, 2019 at 12:49 AM That is so true Andrea and so sad too! Many thanks for your lovely visit, with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Tom Cunningham May 31, 2019 at 3:11 AM So tragic Ann, seems to be everyday now you hear of this. But you cut funding for the police and rising crime is the result. Well written and good luck. Tom Ann Gilmour May 31, 2019 at 4:26 AM Yes that is the problem Tom, resulting in so many of these tragic incidents. Oh dear, what a world we live in! Thanks for your good wishes Tom, with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Panagiota Romios May 30, 2019 at 7:40 PM Ann..a great Senryu about tragic events Ann. Sorry fo hear of this. panagiota xpxo Ann Gilmour May 31, 2019 at 4:23 AM Thank you Pagagiota for your kind visit. Yes it is very sad, but these crimes are on the increase. Kindest thoughts Ann xx

Jan Allison May 30, 2019 at 5:36 PM made me think of the terrible knife crimes we seem to see in the news on a daily basis:-( hugs Jan xx Ann Gilmour May 30, 2019 at 5:41 PM Yes that is what I was thinking about when I wrote it Jan. They seem to be happening on a daily basis, especially in London - almost an epidemic! Very scary and very sad too. Kindest thoughts Ann xx